Mondays Finish the Story – Not Fair
Here is my contribution to Mondays Finish the Story, a prompt challenge which supplies not only a photo but also the first sentence!
I’ve decided not to slaughter everything in sight this week and go for a more thoughtful piece. So let’s see how that works out 🙂
We have 100-150 words not including the first sentence, which I have highlighted in bold in my story. Click on the blue froggy to see this week’s other contributions!
“They say that life is a game of chess…”
“Chess, Grandfather?”
“Yes lad. You see, everybody has a different way of doing things. Take the bishop.”
The boy picked up a piece. “This one, Grandfather?”
“That’s the one, lad. He’s sneaky – diagonal mover. Just like knights, popping in all of a sudden. Then you have your rooks. They’re straight-movers.”
“So, straightforward and sneaky people, Grandfather?”
“That’s it lad. Your pawns, they’re the workforce, but if they apply themselves – reach the other side of the board – they achieve real power. The king is the key, but while he stays at the back, his queen ranges far and wide destroying everything in her path.”
“Cool!”
“And on top of everything, you have to think several moves ahead, plan everything out.”
“Just like in life!”
“Exactly. Now, lad, let’s play.”
“Okay, Grandfather. Hey! One of my pieces is missing. That’s not fair… oh.”
“Now you’re getting it, lad. Just like life.”
I think it worked out well! Nice job 🙂
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Thanks 🙂 Glad you liked it!
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Ali, That’s really good. You know your chess. Well written. 🙂 — Susan
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Thanks! I used to play quite a bit in my younger days.
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Ain’t that the truth! I never learned how to play chess. 😦
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Yup.
I haven’t actually played chess in years. No-one to play against 😦
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Well done! I liked the way that you explained the pieces and related them to people! And, the missing piece? Touché! Thank you for participating again! I hope that you will join in again next week! Be well! ^..^
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked my little chess/life story! I didn’t notice the missing piece at first but when I did everything fell into place.
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Funny how one little thing can do it for you, isn’t it? 🙂
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Yep, it was the icing on the cake for my story.
I wonder if someone threw it overboard 🙂
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Most likely they took it home as a souvenir! Can you imagine? LOL! 😀
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Great story. Finally no blood and gore with my morning coffee.
I play chess online, either alone with a computer or get into a room with “live” people. I think they are alive. Possibly some aliens from one of your story’s.
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Even I couldn’t get blood and gore out of that photo. Unless someone had taken the missing knight and pummelled someone to death with it…
Sorry your current chess opponents are a bit “alien” 🙂
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Loved your story and how you used it as an educational tool for the child…just like life.
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I’m glad you liked it! It’s grandpa’s job to pass on the wisdom 🙂
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Oh, grandpa just may be the sly one! Nice story!
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He’s got a lifetime of wisdom to impart. I’m glad you liked it!
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Ah yes. The pawns, the worker bees make everything possible. I liked the way your story flowed and as always the ending was great.
DJ
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Thanks, DJ. I always get a story idea, then I work out an ending, and only then I start writing.
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Very nice, and no-one died in this one. 🙂
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Makes a change 🙂 Glad you liked it!
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You know, I think I could actually here Grandfather’s voice. Great piece!
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Thanks, I’m glad it came through so clearly!
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HEAR not HERE. Geez.
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🙂
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Loved it!
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Thanks!
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I enjoyed how you made the grandfather’s voice so much like the older generation teaching the younger–I could really hear it.
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I’m glad I successfully managed to get that across in my story. Thanks!
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Wonderful story D-man. I love the way the Grandfather taught the young lad about chess and life.
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That’s the grandfather’s job! And he wants a chess partner too, I think 🙂
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It so does pat to be alert doesn’t it. Well done great tale.
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It does indeed. Thanks, I’m glad you liked it!
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This truly worked. Beautifully crafted.
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Thank you! I’m glad you liked it.
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Awwwww, surely that missing white steed got shot, drawn and quartered, run over, sent to the glue factory…. something! I want my Dralihorror!!!! Life isn’t FAIR!!!!! 😉
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Never fear, ES (I liked the Dralihorror comment you made on my Christmas card, by the way!). I’m about to publish my Friday Fictioneers story, in which dire things happen (though without any gore I’m afraid!).
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