Off Mission
It’s time for Mondays Finish the Story! This challenge is hosted by Barbara Beacham and gives us 100-150 words to write a little story based on both a photograph and an opening sentence. The opening sentence does not count towards the word count!
This week’s picture features a helicopter. Is it on a rescue or scouting mission, or is it about to rain down fiery death on some unsuspecting person? What could it be? Read on to find out!
The supplied opening sentence is in bold in my story, which is called “Off Mission”.
Silently as the people watched, the black hawk helicopter lifted into the air.
Its pilot Jonas’ orders were clear – guns free, select targets of opportunity. As he flew off, keeping low to avoid radar detection, he knew exactly where he would plant his missiles.
They say “the female of the species is more deadly than the male”, and his chosen target certainly lived up to that. She was vicious, unforgiving, intractable. She destroyed lives, ripped families asunder, ground people into the dirt. Evil had a face, and it was hers.
He began to sweat as his HUD counted down the range – five kilometres, four, three… and there it was, the blacked-out customised SUV containing his nemesis.
She’d even had the nerve, the temerity, to phone him up yesterday to demand – demand! – that he “get up off his fat lazy arse” and sign the papers finalising their divorce.
“Finalise this, bitch!” he screamed as his finger tightened on the trigger.
Yikes! Take her out while the life insurance still may have him as the beneficiary. Smart!
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This is why you don’t upset someone who flies a million dollars worth of killing machine for a living 🙂
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Maybe it’s cheaper than divorce. It’s certainly faster and a permanent solution. Nonetheless, I hope it doesn’t become a trend. There would hardly be anyone left after a while 🙂 Our neighborhoods would be nothing but rubble.
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Now I’ve got a mental image of hundreds of attack helicopters whizzing around with psychos at the stick 🙂
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It sounds like home to me 🙂
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🙂
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Now that is one bad ass dude!
DJ
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He certainly is! And a bit psycho.
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I sense some built up aggression coming out here. Best stay on your good side. But you engaged me throughout so thank you.
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Glad you liked it. I think this has been building in Jonas for a long time!
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Bahahaha! beautiful… I was waiting on alien invasion or some such thing but this was better 😉
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Why bother with alien invasions when there’s so much “fun” to be had with real-life stuff? 🙂
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Maybe they should have just stayed friends and not gotten married. Hope she wasn’t home.
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I’m pretty sure she was in her car, though it would be just typical if she’d lent the SUV to someone else for the day.
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Til death do us part…. how sweet! 🙂
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It’s a story of love, betrayal and guided missiles!
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HaHa! Your commenters are pure gold. You packed a powerful punch in a few words! 😀
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And Jonas packed a powerful punch in a few missiles! Glad you liked it.
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Ali, Well, you’ve just literarily (is that a word?) wiped another character off the map. Good story. This dark mood seems to come upon you every so often and death is in the script. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Yep, that’s another one gone :-). Glad you enjoyed it!
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He’s clearly taking the whole thing really well…. 😉
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Yeah, he seems pretty laid back about the whole thing 🙂
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That’s one way to finalize a divorce! Good story! Thanks again for taking part! Stay tuned for next week’s challenge! It comes to us from outer space! 🙂
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An option only available to those with a handy attack helicopter, though 🙂
Ooh, ooh, outer space! I’ll have to get my sci-fi hat ready to go.
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And, what an option to have! Next week could use a sci-fi hat! 🙂
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Whoa, that was a great story. Loved the manner in which he got up off his fat ass. Bravo!
Seriously, there wasn’t one politically correct comment to your story.
You’ve collected a blood thirsty crew.
Yeah!
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He certainly did as he was bid 🙂
Yeah, we all like a bit of mayhem. I think it’s what’s called a “quickie divorce”.
I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Tricky situation ~ Handled with sadistic anarchy ~ 🙂
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I think he’s lost the plot just a little bit 🙂
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I guess that’s what it comes to when the prenup is unclear …
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“Always get a lawyer to check your prenup to avoid unfortunate fiery death from the skies” I always say.
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