Hunter and Prey
It’s Mondays Finish the Story time. Because its Monday!
This challenge is hosted by Barbara Beecham and involves writing 100 to 150 words in response to a photo. To help us along we also get the starting sentence (which is not part of the word count). Something a bit different this week from me. The supplied starting sentence is in bold in my story below.
To see this week’s other contributions, click on the little blue froggy.
She was unaware that she was being watched.
But everything and everyone is watched. All the time.
The worm, as it goes about its business, is unaware of the bird watching it hungrily, which in turn is oblivious to the hawk above.
The deer has not seen the wolf, stalking it on silent paws. The wolf, intent on its prey, has not seen the hunter staring through the sights of his rifle, already counting the money the wolf’s pelt will bring.
The snow turns red and the hunter claims his prize.
High above, secreted within his cloaked scout ship, Ka’N’Kath watches the hunter through his ship’s optical scanning matrix.
Designation Oltrix 427, local name “Earth”, primitive weapons, multiple natural resources, recommend conquest.
Ka’N’Kath sends the message to High Command, turning his ship towards home, a home he will never again see. For he, in his turn, is being watched.
There is always a bigger fish.
Who watches the watchmen, lol. Great. 😀
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Definitely someone somewhere, if my story is to be believed 🙂
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Now I am paranoid that someone is watching me… 😀
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I’ve worried myself even 😦
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Wonderful Ali ~ Your imagination stretches as high as the celestial untouchable ~ 🙂
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I’m glad you enjoyed it! I’m looking forward to the next part of your saga, but since it’s nearly bedtime I shall catch up with it and the other stories tomorrow 🙂
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Love it! We are all being watched! Great take! Thank you for participating this week! Stay tuned for next? 🙂 ^..^
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Glad you liked it! There are eyes everywhere…
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Great imagination. I suppose it is going to get worse (the watching). I’m paranoid too.
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Everybody is watching everybody else 😦
Glad you liked my story!
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There always is and just when you think it is safe to go out at night. Enjoyed this story.
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Even when you think you’re top of the food chain. Thanks!
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I loved the last line!
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Thanks, I always try to get a good last line in.
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I loved how even the human-hunting alien was a just a small fry in the end.
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And little does he know…
I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Ooh, very deep! Excellent story! 🙂
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Thanks! I’m glad the deeper meaning came across 🙂
It was originally going to be all blood and guts but then I had a different idea.
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Enjoyed the esoteric take on this one.
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Thanks, it’s a bit different to my usual writing, I’m glad you liked it.
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Very cool take on this. I like the idea that there’s always another link in the chain above and beyond. Great last line.
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Thanks! There’s always someone/thing bigger.
It was something a bit different for me this week so I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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Whoever is busy watching me is going to end up awfully disappointed…
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That’s the way I always feel about me, too. “They’ll” soon get tired of watching me making cheese sandwiches and watching Star Trek.
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Reminds me of “The Sword in the Stone.” Merlin got it.
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Wow, it’s been ages since I saw that film so I checked it out on Wikipedia. It sounds mad!
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I just reread the book … It’s the first part of “The Once and Future King,” and it’s even better than I remember.
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What a great idea. It’s definitely enough to make you paranoid. 🙂
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I’ve already checked my house for hidden cameras 😦
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Oh, what a cycle! Big Brother has his eyes on you.
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Everywhere you go… dum dum DUM 🙂
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chillingly entertaining. 😀
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I love being a reader and seeing where a storyteller takes me.
Great!!
* waiting for the basement men.
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I’m glad you liked it!
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You have written this idea of watchers and the watched really well. it’s a creepy feeling that everything on Earth could be being watched by something else. Never ending . . . Great story!
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Thanks! I achieved my creepy goal then 🙂
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Great story, Ali. With the population of India what it is, I’m used to being watched. 🙂 The clue is to blend in. Everything is a shared experience. I liked the way everyone in your story was being watched. I’m curious now as to who was watching the alien. Well done and creative as usual. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks! There was a bigger alien watching the alien, but there was probably an even bigger one watching him too!
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