Never Happy
Here is my contribution to Mondays Finish the Story, hosted every week by Barbara Beacham. We get a photo, a starting sentence and 150 words.
I was very busy at work and couldn’t think of a story so I’ve done some dialogue. A little snippet of life, between two old friends, perhaps, meeting for lunch. Or maybe a husband and wife.
Click on the blue froggy to read the other stories. The opening sentence is in bold in my story.
“Pizza anyone?”
“Mmm, pizza. Food of the gods.”
“Food of the gods?”
“Pizza – Italian, right? Italy, Rome, Roman gods – Zeus and such. QED.”
“’Jupiter.’ Zeus was Greek, moron.”
“Whatever. Dig in! Mmm. Argh! Wait! What is this nonsense?”
“What’s wrong now?”
“A strange taste… in my mouth… little black globes of death…”
“Olives.”
“Olives? Urgh.”
“If you don’t like them pick them off, for God’s sake. Stop making a meal out of everything.”
“Ha! ‘Meal.’ Well punned.”
“Can I have your olives, then?”
“If you’re sure you wanna risk it, go ahead.”
“If you don’t like olives, why did you order olives?”
“You gotta take the good with the bad.”
“But you’re picking the ‘bad’ off.”
“It’s the principal of the thing. Pass me the garlic bread.”
“’Please’ would be nice.”
“Mmm, garlic bread. Argh! A strange taste… in my mouth… little shredded cloves of death…”
“That’s the garlic. Shoot me now.”
“Never happy,” but never dull either! You know what Tolstoi said – ‘All happy families are alike; each unhappy family is unhappy in its own way.’
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Good quote! I think this couple is happy in their bickering.
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Word power that lives and resonates wth tasty descriptive digestible slices ~ Food for the mind indeed Ali ~ 🙂
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I like that – “tasty descriptive digestible slices” 🙂
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I also dislike black olives. Pick em off!! LOL
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I’ll have ’em. Yum 🙂
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Garry likes anchovies. Salty slimy little fishies. I don’t like olives either. I know, missing all the best stuff.
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Quite the finicky eater I would say. Why order garlic bread if you don’t like garlic? Hello?!? Funny story Ali!!
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It’s the principal of the thing, apparently 🙂
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I don’t think I’ve ever had anchovies – I don’t like the sound of them.
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Olives, yuck.
Not liking garlic? I don’t know how long I can be friends with such a person.
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I love olives and garlic 🙂 Though I don’t have garlic much as I tend to overdo it and end up stinking of it for days.
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Heh, very entertaining. You packed the dialogue full of character. I can see two old friends bicker like this, or maybe brothers. Nicely done!
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I’m thinking of it as a kind of comfortable bickering. It probably happens every time they go out! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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I’d gladly take his olives and garlic for him… mmmmm (I don’t think there can ever be enough of either.) 😉
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Not if I get there first – I love garlic and olives too 🙂
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Have you tried garlic stuffed olives? The best of both worlds 🙂 mmmmmm
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I have. And I agree!
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Definitely on a date! Whine…Whine…Whine…He has to be very comfortable with her… or it will likely be their last date? (I hate olives, too!) Enjoyed!
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I think it’s a conversation between two people who are very comfortable with each other. Otherwise it definitely will be their last date!
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I enjoyed the dialogue, felt very real. Funny too.
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Thanks, I’m glad you felt it was real. That’s always my aim when writing a 100% dialogue story.
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Soon enough they’ll pick off the entire pizza.
…Man, this was an easy photo prompt. FF has never done pizza. I think.
P.S. I love black olives and garlic! Maybe not together at once… 😐 But, yes! 🙂
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My first thought for the story was actually to have them pick stuff off until only the base was left!
I love olives and garlic too 🙂
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Olives are brain food—I mean, loaded with good fat.
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If only there were no word limit, this would have eventually devolved into the murder scene we all anticipated!
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I’m thinking “death by pizza choking”. Or maybe one of them will just get fed up with the whining and go crazy with a pizza slicer.
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Philosophy through pizza, cool! 😀
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Pizza’s a versatile food!
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No olives and no garlic? Blaspheme! 🙂 The dialogue is excellent and I truly enjoyed your story Ali! Thanks again for participating and I hope that you come back for another interesting photo and opening line… Be well…. ^..^
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I’m glad you liked it! For the record, I love olives and garlic 🙂
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Me too!
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Great dialogue D-man – so easy to see it all playing out 🙂 I don’t usually like olives, but Kalamata olives in sourdough bread is yum. How can anyone not like garlic? Little cloves of roast garlic with a roast dinner is…bliss.
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Olives in bread is a great combination. I bet olives in garlic bread is even better!
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It is. Our local supermarket makes their own olive and garlic sourdough loaf 😀
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little [insert item] of death is now officially my favourite line for any “unnatural” food item I encounter. brilliant work once again draliman 🙂
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One of those guys is a bit of a drama queen 🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed my story!
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Pass me the olives..i love it and i really do that .. many people are like that, never happy. Loved it.
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I’m glad you liked it!
I like when I’m in a restaurant and there’s a little dish of olives. So many people hate them that I get to eat loads 🙂
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I’m never happy, I gave up pizza and garlic bread. Hungry, grumpy and hungry.
Liked those two people, did I mention this photo and great dialogue has me hungry for pizza and bread.
When I lose twenty pounds I’m eating pizza. Happy happy happy
Hated that photo, hungry.
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It made me feel hungry too. Good luck with your road back to pizza! I’d be grumpy if I wasn’t eating pizza.
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Great dialogue! I can sympathise completely with the ‘little black globes of death’ – horrible things – but garlic is yummy! 🙂
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Thanks!
I actually really like the little black globes of death 🙂
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Some people are never happy.
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I don’t think this chap is even trying.
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I think your right.
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Never happy indeed!
I can imagine a husband and wife having this conversation, it would be very funny to listen in on.
Great dialogue, I enjoyed this!
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I’m thinking husband and wife too. Some eavesdropping fun at a restaurant perhaps. I’m glad you liked the dialogue!
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Oh … I like this conversation! It flows beautifully and is highly amusing. The couple of reference to olives are excellent.
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I’m glad you liked the flow of the dialogue. I always read it through several times to make sure it’s believable as actual people talking.
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Glad to see people can still differentiate their ancient Gods by Zeus!!
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I actually had to Google the Roman equivalent to Zeus! It seems all recent films have concentrated on the Greek 🙂
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Funny stuff, Ali. 😀
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Thanks 🙂
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Olives. love Olives! So much better without the Pizza
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Olives and feta cheese, that’s a very tasty combination.
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Really well done – I really enjoy good dialogue and this was good.
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Thanks, I like writing dialogue!
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