MFTS – Fool Me Twice
Here is my contribution for Barbara Beacham’s Mondays Finish the Story for this week. For this challenge we get 150 words or so plus a photo and an opening sentence.
I must confess, I’m twenty-odd words over this week. Sorry :-(. This week’s story picks up pretty much where last week’s left off, as we rejoin newly-deceased stoners Chad and Brad, their souls ripped from their bodies after mistaking tales of alcoholic beverages with spirits of the ghostly variety.
To read this week’s other stories, click on the blue froggy. The supplied opening sentence is in bold in my story.
“What a tangled web we weave, when first we practise to deceive, dude.”
So saying, Chad jabbed the lead ghostly spirit (Basil by name), his fingers coming away covered with ectoplasm, sticky and insubstantial as a spider’s web.
“I’M SURE I DON’T KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN,” intoned Basil.
“You lured us here with talk of spirits,” complained Chad. “Vodka, whisky…”
“Advocaat,” added Brad, puffing on a joint.
“AND SPIRITS YOU FOUND!” laughed Basil. “DON’T YOU JUST LOVE HOMONYMS!”
“Chad, calm down!” said Brad, offering him an insubstantial joint. Chad took a puff.
“Dude!” he exclaimed happily.
“Dude,” agreed Brad.
“We want back in our bodies, dead Dude,” said Chad, pointing at his corpse.
“PERHAPS… THERE IS A WAY,” pondered Basil. “WOULD YOU CONSENT TO… TRIAL IN COURT?”
“Hell yeah!” said Chad before Brad could stop him. “No jury in the world will rule against us!”
“BWAHAHA!” laughed Basil. “TRIAL BY COMBAT! IN THE COURT OF THE DAMNED! FOOLED YOU AGAIN, GULLIBLE STONERS!”
“Dude,” said Chad.
“Dude,” agreed Brad. “You know what we need?”
“Yeah!”
And so the pair set off in search of more ghostly weed, the better to endure the trials ahead.
Ha! A perfect end to your story, dude.
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Hee, thanks! But is this the end, or will Chad and Brad return to face those trials? And if they do, will they remember anything about it? 🙂
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Nah, I don’t think it will be the end. Hmmm…I bet it will be fuzzy. 🙂
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Cool… so glad you continued Chad and Brad’s excellent adventure. Now we have to know how they fare in the Court of the Damned!!! “What a tangled web we weave, when first we practise to deceive, dude.” Best use of the prompt line!!!!!
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This week’s prompt was perfect for a continuation! It would be good as a trilogy but I’d have to be very careful with the words to finish it all off in only one more episode.
I’m glad you enjoyed Bill and Ted, um, I mean Chad and Brad’s continuing adventures 🙂
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Dude! Pass that joint over here. I need further fortification.
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Let’s all take a toke 🙂
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Hooray, more Chad and Brad, dude! I’m looking forward to the trial 🙂
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I expect they’ll be fine once they’ve “fortified” (or they won’t care) 🙂
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Do I detect a little bit of Bill and Ted? Great and funny continuation!
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You detect a lot of Bill and Ted 🙂
I’m glad you liked it!
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Funny and interesting 🙂
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Glad you liked it 🙂
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Take out all of the “Dudes!” and I think you’d have met your word limit. This will go against Chad and Brad at their trial…
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“Dude” is what Chad and Brad are all about! I expect they will regret it come trial time, though.
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Oh Ali, you had me laughing with this one, and I love the way you tied this to last week’s challenge. Funny story Dude! 😀 Thanks for the contribution to the MFtS challenge, and be well… ^..^
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I’m glad you enjoyed Brad and Chad’s continuing adventures in Miner’s Hill 🙂
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Very well done!
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the weed is giving you lot of freedom to move the story anyways. I like it.
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They do seem quite fond of it 🙂
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Hey dude, that was an AWE-some story! I quite like Brad and Chad, and hope to see them again soon. And, you don’t have to stop at a trilogy. 🙂
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I’m glad you liked it! Chad and Brad are quite likeable dudes 🙂
A trilogy would be nice and neat, but I think they’ll need more stories to extricate themselves from this.
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Wow! That is power packed stuff they are smoking 😀
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I reckon it’ll get them through the trials ahead 🙂
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BWAHAHA! Very cute story! Good weed 🙂
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Let’s hope it’s good enough to see them through the trials ahead. If I ever finish the story 🙂
Glad you liked it!
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Quite a convincingly creative sticky ectoplasmic post Ali ~ Brad and Chads bodiless consumption of dreams will never be entombed by bonkers Basil~ He be headed for the cooking pot ~ Roll on the next haunting post ~ 🙂
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Yes, Basil better watch his step, I think he’s underestimating the lads 🙂
Thanks for your wonderful comment!
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My pleasure ~ I appreciate your great writing ~ 🙂
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Great addiction to last week’s story …this has definitely peaked my interest… can’t wait to see how that trial goes!
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I’m already trying to think of some cool stuff on the chance that next week’s photo and sentence will work!
I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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Awesome! I can’t wait to see if you can make it work!
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🙂
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Good continuation and funny too.:)
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Thanks, glad you liked it 🙂
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haha – I just kept Bill and Ted’s Excellent Adventure when reading this. all it needed was an air guitar! :p
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Yeah, be excellent to each other and party on, dudes! Maybe they’ll “air guitar” if they get through the trial and escape 🙂
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:p
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Ya Man…I’m off for some nip now 😀 Pawkisses 🙂 ❤
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Enjoy the nip, don’t go too crazy 🙂
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Now if they can get the other spirits hih, they have a chance. They’re just the kind who’ll come out with flying colors. Bill and Ted always did. Hilarious, Ali. 😀 — Suzanne
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They can do anything if they put what’s left of their minds to it!
I’m glad you found it funny 🙂
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