MFTS – Live By the Coin…
Here is my story for Barbara Beacham’s Mondays Finish the Story. The supplied opening line is in bold in my story.
I had trouble merging a constantly nervous and tense woman with coins, but here it is all the same! Click on the blue froggy for all this week’s other stories.
She lived a life that some would describe as being on edge. She was constantly panicking, especially when it came to make a decision. Watching Batman, she was terribly impressed by “Two Face”, making all his decisions by flipping a coin. Her salvation!
Rummaging around at the back of the sofa she found one, depicting a bison. Everything changed.
Everything was in the lap of fate. “No bison” – she binned her boyfriend. “Bison” – she stayed at her appalling job. “Bison” – she took an axe and found a family, letting the husband live, killing the wife, sparing the toddler and killing the teenager. The bison had spoken.
Karma caught up when the judge, staring her straight in the eye, flipped a coin, declared “bison” and sent her to the chair. Arriving at the gates of Heaven, the angel flipped a coin, declared “no bison” and sent her downstairs. Fate is a jealous mistress – once you give yourself to Her, She’ll never let you go.
I like your closing line. Food for thought although I think ultimately, we are all in the hands of a fickle fate.
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There’s certainly an element of chance in our lives.
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Excellent!!! Loved what you did here!
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Thanks 🙂
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Welcome!
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Remind me Ali, “never” to decide anything by flipping a coin. I think that woman belonged more in a mental institution than the electric chair. She’d clearly gone over the edge. Of course, she must have also had a lousy lawyer. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I think so too. A mental institution was “no bison” however 🙂
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I flipped a coin to decide if I should comment on this post or not. it came up no bison, so sorry, I will not be leaving one…
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Darn. Well, I’m not going to reply to your lack of comment either then 🙂
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Loved it, a good movie or novel here.
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked it!
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I will never flip a coin again! 🙂
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I wouldn’t it’s addictive!
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You’re right! I’ve been known to do it before when I can’t make a decision. Uh oh!
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Wonderful! Great story, making decisions is hard – relying on chance a great adventure, until you end up in the chair! 🙂
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Yes, a conscience to go along with the coin would have been good 🙂
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Fate is a jealous mistress – once you give yourself to Her, She’ll never let you go. ~ I find this interesting. Hmmm… now I’m in deep thinking. 🙂
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I can imagine people getting stuck into this way of doing things. It helps if you know the difference between right and wrong though!
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True. But sometimes the thin line between these two confuses some of us. That’s the tricky part. 🙂
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Very true 🙂
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Loved your story and how crazy the psychopath was. 🙂
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Yeah, she was real crazy 🙂
I’m glad you liked it!
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When she got downstairs they wouldn’t let her in, the bison was missing again. So to finish the tale, the coin come up tails when she grabbed the devil by the tail.
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She’ll have to wander the void until someone calls “bison”. Or the devil gets upset at having his tail pulled 🙂
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Wow.. Excellent story!
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Thanks 🙂
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What a fitting end, she got what she deserved.
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For sure, the nasty woman.
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An engrossing read. I love your interpretation of the prompt and your last line is excellent. I can’t imagine anyone flipping coins ‘downstairs’ so she’s likely to be there for the duration – and rightly so.
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No, I think that “downstairs” there aren’t many choices to be made. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Another creative storyline! Well done!!
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked it!
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