FF – Uninvited Guest
Here is my story for Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle. This week’s photo was contributed by Yvette Prior.
Copyright Yvette Prior
“Unbelievable, son.”
“Um…”
“You’re at university, here to study and what do I find? Booze, pot, half-dressed semi-comatose people lying around everywhere.”
“Um, if you’d called first to say you were…”
“That’s not the point, is it?”
“Um…”
“IS IT?!”
“No, Dad.”
“Have you any idea what I go through every day? Hours of work to pay your tuition, your mother constantly nagging… I’m knackered. You’re living in party town and you didn’t invite me?”
“Um.. eh, what?”
“I’ll be staying for a bit, son. Call your mother and tell her I have ‘car troubles’. And get me a beer.”
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Haha!! Loved the twist in the end. Daddy needs some fun too!!
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He does. He’ll be cramping his son’s style for a bit, though! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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Ha ha – loved the twist! Nicely done. 🙂
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked it!
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Nice one Dad, time to relive his youth for a couple of nights at least! 🙂
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I expect his “big end” has gone, it could be a whole week 🙂
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This is great. As a college mom I can appreciate it.
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Thanks! I’m glad you liked it and can relate 🙂
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LOL! Wonderful twist!
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Thanks 🙂
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I hope Pops knows how to play beer pong…
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I’m sure he’ll learn, to the embarrassment of his poor son. Though his mates will probably think he’s got the coolest dad ever!
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Ha ha ha, boys just wanna have fun!
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And what fun he’s planning on having!
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Oops. I didn’t expect that. Yes, Dad is clearly envious. I hope he doesn’t look for a young girlfriend.
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I think he just wants a bit of a break 🙂
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So not what the son wants to hear, I am sure!!!
Gonna be a thorn in his side before long, I suspect. Fun take, sir!
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His son’s not going to be a happy bunny. I hope he has some friends left by the time dad goes home! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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There is that too!!! Unless the friends like pops more… then that’s a whole ‘nother problem!
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Oh boy, that could be a bit of a bruise to the kid’s ego 🙂
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Double whammy…
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Wow, what a twist to that story, Ali. 😀 — Suzanne
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His son certainly didn’t see it coming 🙂
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hehehe! I didn’t expect that! 😀
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Neither did his son, the poor lad 🙂
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like father like son. great story.
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He’s a real chip off the old block, he should have anticipated something like this. I’m glad you liked it!
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Dear Ali,
I wonder if the son would’ve preferred a chewing out from his Dad rather than Dad joining the gang. Oh dear. Awkward. But funny. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
I’m sure he would have preferred a quick telling off and then be left alone! I’m glad you liked it 🙂
Ali
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Great twist – and good for Dad!
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Yeah, he’s only as young as he feels!
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That’s gonna be awkward few days ahead for sonny pothead. Hope dad doesn’t hit on his son’s friends.
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Now that would be really awkward!
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Ungrateful dad. (only interested in the beer). If I was him I would be glad to have the son out of house – you know – enjoy yourself lad, live life, get a career a job and all that. You’re on your own now – good luck. Bye for now.
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Yeah, off you go, son, I’m sure you’ll have better things to do than come back here at the holidays, we’ve done our bit…
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Uh, okay, not the expected reaction… maybe better, maybe worse… Dad, partying harder than son… has an interesting twist to it. Great writing!
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I’m sure he won’t embarrass his son at all 🙂 I’m glad you liked it!
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okay – you really got me at the end:
You’re living in party town and you didn’t invite me?”
haha
reminds me of Lindsey Lohan’s mother (or what we heard about them partying together0
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I think I’ve heard stuff about them too. I’m not sure this guy is quite as happy about the situation as Lindsey, though!
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Let’s hope Dad doesn’t stay too long and cramp son’s style. Great set up to the very funny twist.
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I’m sure if he sticks around his wife will come looking 🙂 I’m glad you liked it!
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Or, picking up on Dad’s attitude, his wife might be glad to the break too.
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My kind of Dad, Ali! In fact, I am that kind of Dad!
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Party on, Kelvin!
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Hilarious 🙂 Dad needs some “Me Time” too, I guess.
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Just a little break to recharge the batteries 🙂
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LOL…even getting him to lie to his mother!
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Not the best parenting!
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LOL…ya think?
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Like father, like son. 😉
I chuckled at the image of “half-dressed semi-comatose people lying around everywhere”. 🙂
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The morning after the night before 🙂
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Witty and clever. Very well told.
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked it!
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Hahaha … I love the unexpected and hilarious twist at the end! =)
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I’m glad you liked it 🙂 The son wasn’t expecting it either, poor lad!
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PARRRTY TIME!!!!
Move over, Rover, and let daddy take over!
Fun story.
Randy
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Let me show you how we did it in the 80s, son… 🙂
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Poor kid. It’s going to be an awkward party for him tonight!
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For sure. Especially when his embarrassing dad starts the embarrassing dad dancing 🙂
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Daddy’s invested in his son’s education after all! 🙂
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At least he’s getting the good of it 🙂
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It might be the only return he is going to get 😉
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Ha, very probably, I’d say 🙂
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Very fun & great twist.
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Thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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