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CWG Week 5 Episode 25

It’s week 5 of Kerrie’s Chain Writing Game! This week sounded like a budding romance, but it didn’t take long for everything to go horribly wrong.

Catch up with the story by clicking on the little blue froggy. My third contribution is below.


He’s Behind You – episode 25

“Uncle Victor? It’s me, Ben.”

“Ben? How are you, my boy? How’s your mum?” came the reply.

“I’m not so good, Uncle. I’m at work and there are these Botanical Industrial Units…”

“Biological Infiltration Units? I didn’t know you were cleared.”

“They’re loose,” continued Ben. “They’re trying to kill…”

“Give me that!” snapped Kelly, switching to speaker-phone. “Victor? We need to reach the kill switch. People are dying.”

“Excellent!” chortled Victor. “They work, then.”

“Please, Uncle!” shouted Ben.

“The building is sealed. This is an excellent test!”

“Not any more,” said Kelly. “We broke a window.”

“What?” screamed Victor. “Okay. Here’s what you need to do.”

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  1. January 28, 2014 at 8:07 pm

    Oh Victor… how could you let your nephew work in such a dangerous place without a simple heads up? Tutut
    I hope he helps them get out!


    • January 28, 2014 at 8:38 pm

      Well, he didn’t seem too worried until he heard his experiment might be about to escape! I’m worried his instructions aren’t going to involve the kill switch.


  2. Al
    January 28, 2014 at 8:33 pm

    HAHAHAHAHA nice 😀


    • January 28, 2014 at 8:39 pm

      Victor’s a sort of amiable evil genius 🙂


      • Al
        January 28, 2014 at 9:05 pm

        Probably where Ben gets his “nice” side from


  3. January 28, 2014 at 9:58 pm

    Hmmm…Now to come up with a way to help them fend off the creatures and keep them from escaping the building. Excellent follow-on!


    • January 29, 2014 at 7:35 am

      Hopefully Victor can help, though I think he still has his own agenda.


  4. January 28, 2014 at 10:17 pm

    Yes this is a good follow up. I wonder what victor instructions are a secret door to the kill switch or another one off the premises or on the same floor they’re on. so many possibilities.


    • January 29, 2014 at 7:36 am

      Hopefully instructions which will kill the creatures and get our protagonists out alive! I’m not sure I trust him – Kelly certainly doesn’t!


  5. January 29, 2014 at 12:34 am

    Awesome! This is a great episode. I love that Victor thinks it’s an excellent test, until he realizes a window has been broken. Too bad he seems to see Ben as part of the test. So much for the kindly uncle. Nice way to keep the plot moving.


    • January 29, 2014 at 7:38 am

      I certainly get the feeling that his nephew’s well-being is not top of his list. Let’s see what instructions he gives our intrepid duo!


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