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The Chain Writing Game Week 2 Episode 17

Here is another instalment to Kerrie’s Chain Writing Game.

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Have You Seen My Wife? – episode 17

The Harley roared to life, and Dennis heard raised voices behind him as he sped off. In his rear-view he could see a crowd of leather-clad bikers pouring out of the bar, heading toward their bikes.

A yell from Trixie pulled his attention back to the road in front of him. He was passing the alley and Jorge was stumbling out, one arm hanging uselessly, blood dripping onto the pavement. Dennis swerved, clipping Jorge’s leg, shattering his shin. Jorge went down.

As Dennis accelerated away, his rear-view revealed police cruisers appearing behind the bikers. He gritted his teeth and accelerated.

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  1. January 5, 2014 at 4:27 pm

    Great follow on! I can just picture the scene.

    DJ

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  2. January 5, 2014 at 4:33 pm

    Whew! I saw that you got your post in before me. But mine still works. Good addition.

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    • January 5, 2014 at 4:54 pm

      Mine was actually supposed to be episode 16 but Danny added his while I was writing mine!

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  3. January 5, 2014 at 4:53 pm

    Cool. Jorge hadn’t been punished enough. I hope it isn’t too much to ask that the cops will interfere with the bikers? Love this piece. At least Dennis is finally moving.

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    • January 5, 2014 at 4:55 pm

      I thought Jorge needed a bit more pain πŸ™‚
      Now Dennis just has to stay ahead of his pursuers.

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      • January 5, 2014 at 5:00 pm

        Good job on that! I hope he can. With Helen unconscious, she’s running out of time.

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  4. January 5, 2014 at 5:09 pm

    Love this scene. I’m glad Jorge’s getting his just comeuppance πŸ˜€ And yes, we’re moving again!

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    • January 5, 2014 at 5:27 pm

      Yes, Jorge annoyed me. I thought a shattered clavicle wasn’t quite enough damage!

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  5. Al
    January 5, 2014 at 5:34 pm

    HAHA And there goes Jorge again πŸ™‚

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    • January 5, 2014 at 6:00 pm

      Maybe he could keep popping up in various scenes and getting more and more bashed up πŸ™‚

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      • Al
        January 5, 2014 at 8:34 pm

        HAHA that would be cool. Comic relief πŸ™‚

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      • January 5, 2014 at 8:58 pm

        πŸ™‚

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  6. January 5, 2014 at 8:32 pm

    Why not invite the Shriner’s to join in and have a big old parade. Go Dennis Go, blow all the stoplights!

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    • January 5, 2014 at 8:58 pm

      Why not, everyone else is converging on poor Dennis!

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  7. January 7, 2014 at 12:42 am

    Nothing like a bit of gratuitous violence, especially when it is directed at scumbag pimps πŸ˜›

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    • January 7, 2014 at 7:31 am

      Yeah, I felt he hadn’t been “chastised” enough πŸ™‚

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      • January 7, 2014 at 8:37 am

        Haha! Chastised? He’s been beaten to a pulp, and that being chastised? Remind me never to get on your bad side! πŸ˜›

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      • January 7, 2014 at 8:46 am

        Once this round is finished I’m considering writing a (separate) post – “Jorge’s Story” – a sort of black comedy which details briefly what happens to him next (and a bit of back story) – he still has two intact limbs to “play” with! (If that’s OK with you, I would need to reference the story – only my followers would see it anyway I expect.) What do you think?

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      • January 7, 2014 at 8:48 am

        DO IT!
        I would definitely reblog it and share it!
        I’m sure everyone who took part in this weeks challenge would love to hear more about the characters we created, so run with your idea πŸ˜€

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      • January 7, 2014 at 8:56 am

        Cool – I’ll try to give that a go then πŸ™‚

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