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CWG Week 3 Episode 5

Welcome to the the Chain Writing Game Week 3, hosted by Kerrie Ann Salsac. This week’s story is called “A Bloody Monday Morning”.



Jenna looked at the new arrival.

“He? Who’s he? Where am I? What’s going…”

“Shush!” whispered the new arrival. “Time to talk later. We need to get out of the open.”

“But…” began Jenna, but the woman was already moving off. Jenna followed, picking at the sliver tattoo.

“Leave it alone!” snapped the woman, glancing back. “You don’t want to mess with that, trust me!”

But could Jenna trust this woman? She had no real choice, she guessed. At least she seemed to have an idea as to what was going on. Determining to keep her wits about her, she followed.

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  1. January 11, 2014 at 4:07 pm

    Hmmm… I wonder what happens if you do mess with the tattoo??


    • January 11, 2014 at 4:11 pm

      I’m thinking maybe your head blows off or something 🙂 .
      Can’t wait to find out, I reckon they’re central to this whole thing.


  2. January 11, 2014 at 4:11 pm

    Glad you picked up the tattoo thread and deepened the mystery about it. Now I’m wondering what happens when you mess with it!


    • January 11, 2014 at 4:15 pm

      I reckon it’s the key to the whole thing, so messing with it could be “bad” 😦


  3. January 11, 2014 at 4:29 pm

    Yeah, I suspect you don’t want to mess with it, or else you don’t go home. Damage the circuitry and the control signal can’t find you any longer. Makes a lot of sense. I think this bit needed to be said because it gives the tattoo greater significance. Great job!


    • January 11, 2014 at 4:34 pm

      I reckon the tattoo would make a great key to the whole thing so I wanted to fix it in everyone’s mind!


      • January 11, 2014 at 4:43 pm

        It’s firmly in mine I can tell you. It probably uses nanotech. So it would appear like a tattoo, but contains computer and signalling circuitry. (even in the real world you can buy paint, right now, that functions like a solar panel!)


        • January 11, 2014 at 4:46 pm

          I like the sound of this – get writing this in!


  4. January 11, 2014 at 4:47 pm

    The story is taking some great twists and turns. Fun fun!


    • January 11, 2014 at 4:50 pm

      I was surprised myself at how quickly it has progressed. We only get 30 episodes maximum I suppose!


  5. January 11, 2014 at 4:48 pm

    Wow, you guys are making it tough on my gray matter to come up with something as good. Way to go on waking me up this morning! 🙂


    • January 11, 2014 at 4:51 pm

      Get a cup of coffee down you and you’ll be good to go 🙂


      • January 11, 2014 at 5:09 pm

        I’m working on that coffee! 🙂


  6. Al
    January 11, 2014 at 5:16 pm

    oooh. I wonder if it releases a who flood of scabies out. Or if it is a barcode.

    More than likely a tracking device. I wonder if she will find clothes, or if we still have to picture this woman walking around naked. I mean, I’m no pervert or anything. Well, no more than the next person 😉


    • January 11, 2014 at 5:18 pm

      I was gonna give her clothes but I “ran out of words” 😉


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