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CWG Week 3 Episode 11

Welcome to the the Chain Writing Game Week 3, hosted by Kerrie Ann Salsac. This week’s story is called “A Bloody Monday Morning”. Here is my second contribution!

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“What’s that sound?” Jenna had stopped sobbing and was looking toward the back of the cave. It was a kind of scratching, skittering noise.

“I don’t know. This is new,” replied Jamie. “Maybe we should…” she continued, gesturing toward the cave mouth. Jenna stood and scurried over to her.

“Does it look to you like the cave floor is moving?” whispered Jenna.

“That’s not the floor! Run!”

The girls raced out of the cave into the teeth of the approaching storm. Behind them a wave of tiny creatures boiled from the cave.

Ahead of them, a twister began to form.

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  1. Al
    January 12, 2014 at 11:09 am

    Yikes.

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    • January 12, 2014 at 4:07 pm

      Yeah, I know right? Big trouble now for the girls.

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      • Al
        January 12, 2014 at 4:20 pm

        Yes indeed

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  2. January 12, 2014 at 12:03 pm

    The weather sucks in this dimension, and the bugs, ugh! Nasty creepy crawlies there. I think there won’t be a resort opening up soon. 😉 Great followon to the previous episode.

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    • January 12, 2014 at 4:09 pm

      It certainly wouldn’t be my first choice of holiday destination!

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  3. January 12, 2014 at 12:23 pm

    I love how they ‘boiled from the cave’!
    Brilliant 😀

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    • January 12, 2014 at 4:09 pm

      There’s nothing quite like bugs “boiling from a cave” to give it that Indiana Jones feel 🙂

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  4. January 12, 2014 at 1:40 pm

    Nice addition. You built great tention.

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    • January 12, 2014 at 4:10 pm

      Thanks, can’t wait to see how they escape!

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  5. January 12, 2014 at 4:40 pm

    Just thinking about a twister filled with bugs sends a shudder up my spine. Great follow-up!

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    • January 12, 2014 at 4:44 pm

      Ugh, yes! Bad enough separately but bugs spinning round to fly off all over the place – yeeks!

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