Literary Lion – A Well-Honed Edge
Here is my story for Laura’s Literary Lion challenge. The Literary Lion has pawed around in his stash of prompts and for this fortnight has produced the prompt word “edge“.
A Well-Honed Edge
Always look after your tools, his Master had told him. He had taken this to heart, spending hours oiling, sharpening, polishing. His routine had always seen him right. His tools had never failed him.
As darkness fell, he pulled on his work clothes, picked up his tools and left the dark, dingy flat – not his everyday home, but nicely anonymous on the nights he worked. Unusually, he felt a little stab of… fear? No, anticipation. He usually worked for money, but tonight he was upholding a tradition, one as ancient as the hills, a tradition which would allow him to take his place as Master.
Blending in with the night, he entered the old man’s house on silent feet, slipping through the hallways until he saw him sitting in his study, reading. As the knife slid easily – oh, so easily – between his former Master’s ribs, he saw a flicker of pride in the old man’s dying eyes of a tradition upheld, a job well executed, and an edge well-honed.
I hope he didn’t use a bulky kitchen knife! 🙂
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Ha 🙂 It’s the most vicious-looking knife I own!
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They are, but a larger one would be hard to stick through the ribs I imagine. 😀 I wonder about myself when that’s my biggest issue.
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Tradition can be so unusual to other cultures! Well done. A stab in the back- seen as honorable???
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Well, he got the better of his Master! It sounded like the sort of tradition ninja-types might have 🙂
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Sounds like it! Glad I am not part of that!
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Way to go, moron! Now you get to be the next one to get stabbed in the chest. Doesn’t anyone think these things through….?
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I have always wondered who would want to be head of an organisation where the road to promotion is “dead man’s shoes”.
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Very intelligent piece of writing. I like the way in which your story starts and ends. Beautifully tackled the prompt with “edge well-honed.”
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Thanks very much! This story came quite quickly to me, but took a lot of editing to get it to sound right. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Sounds like a fine way to end the problem of “no room at the top” in professional advancement. A little messy, but effective 🙂
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I’ve heard it’s quite popular in drug cartels and the like. Of course, this is a far more sophisticated bunch of murderers we’re dealing with here 🙂
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Nice take on the prompt D-man. Well, maybe “nice” isn’t quite the right word, but it sure was a good story 🙂
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Thanks! Nice but nasty 🙂
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Well-written, Ali. Happy Halloween to you too.
—- Suzanne 🙂
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Thanks! Happy Halloween to you too 🙂
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Well written…quite engrossing!
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!
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I wonder how many people would be prepared to do this to get to the top… more than we would like to think, I bet! Great story as always.
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Thanks! I’m sure there are quite a few who would go to these lengths, and many more who are willing to stab you metaphorically in the back.
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A very old story, beautifully told. Poetic. ❤
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Thanks! I was thinking of an ancient order of warriors.
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