FFfAW – Yellow
Here’s my story for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers, hosted by Priceless Joy. This week’s picture was provided by Louise from The Storyteller’s Abode.
To read this week’s other stories, click the blue froggy.

Copyright Lousie at The Storyteller’s Abode
“What… what… what’s going on? It’s yellow. It’s all… yellow! The chair, the walls, even you… I have to get out of here…”
“Mr Jenkins, please calm down…”
“Out here, the sky, yellow! The buildings, yellow! The beach… okay, the beach was always yellow. But the rest…”
“Mr Jenkins, please come back inside!”
“Never again to see the blue of the sky, the blue-green of the sea. All is tinged, spoiled, tainted… oh, woe is me, woe is me!”
“Mr Jenkins, please, you’re overreacting!”
“Easy for you to say, easy for you with your reds, your blues, your greens. My life is yellow now! Yellow, yellow, yellow…”
“As I’ve already explained, Mr Jenkins, you need the dye in your eyes so we can check for scratches to your cornea. It will wear off in a few minutes.”
“… yellow, yellow… huh? Oh, right, you did say that, didn’t you? Well, come on then, check for scratches. I haven’t got all day, I’m a busy man.”
This is hilarious… Wonderful post Draliman! Hope he gets rid of yellow😀
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Apparently yellow will be gone in just a few minutes :-). I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Haha… Yes liked it v much:)
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I’m still laughing. I’ve had that dye. I don’t THINK I panicked. But who can remember?
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I had it once as well, a long time ago. Very weird!
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Hahahahaha! OMG this is hilarious! That was a total surprise ending! LOVE IT!
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I’m glad you liked it! That dye in the eyes can be quite worrying, especially if you’re too busy feeling sorry for yourself to listen to the ophthalmologist 🙂
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I agree! It is a wonderful story!
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Thanks 🙂
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Maybe purple would have suited him better. 🙂
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Purple’s a much more relaxing colour 🙂
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Hilarious, Ali. I’ll bet that guy’s never been a good listener. He probably drove his parents and teachers to distraction. I’ve never had that dye test. I can just imagine it’s weird. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I don’t think he listens to anyone he feels is not worthy of his attention. He must miss a lot! I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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He was yellowing pretty loudly, wasn’t he? (That’s right, I combined “Yell” with “Bellow”. Crazy, huh?) I’m not sure what color I’d choose if my world were to go monochromatic, but I don’t think yellow would be that bad. Good one as always!
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Ha, “yellowing”, clever!
At least yellow’s a fairly cheerful colour, if you have to be stuck with one. Glad you liked it!
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Great story, enjoyed reading it! Poor guy, I guess he wasn’t really listening to the doctor eh!
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No, he was too busy panicking, though I don’t think this guy really listens to anyone. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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This is funny. Given my own vision issues, I probably shouldn’t be laughing but…
Ellespeth
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I’m off for an eye test next month. Bifocals aren’t far in my future, I think.
I’m glad you liked the story!
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I don’t think I would care for that fye test.
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dye..not fye
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I guessed “eye” 🙂
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I had it once. Pretty weird while it lasted!
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XD I was hooked from the beginning.
I expected some horrid end which made it even more funny.
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He was expecting some horrid end too 🙂
I’m glad you liked it!
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Hahahaha imagine if the yellow doesn’t wear off! Omg xD
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Ha, yes. I don’t think Mr Jenkins would take that too well!
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I hope the doctor lives to tell us the story of that xD
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🙂
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Funny! 😀
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Glad you liked it!
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He really should have listened to the optician! Very amusing, Ali. 🙂
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Maybe he needs to visit a hearing specialist as well 🙂
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