What Pegman Saw – Prophecy
Here is my story for the 150 word fiction challenge, What Pegman Saw. This week we’re at the Palace of Pena in Portugal. I plopped little Pegman down on Google Maps and found a picture for my story.
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The Oracle gazed out over the grand vista afforded by the uppermost battlements of the Palace of Pena, her face filled with sadness.
“Once this place was filled with beauty. Trees, grasslands. One could hear the birds singing and watch as deer and rabbits played in the forests, celebrating the return of spring with all its endless possibilities.”
“But, my Lady Oracle,” protested Novice Miguel, “I see those things in abundance!”
“As you are aware, dear Miguel, I see not today, but that which is yet to come,” replied the Oracle, touching his arm in comfort.
Miguel felt a chill flood his body. The Oracle had never been known to be wrong. He followed her as she shook her head sadly, returning to the palace. Behind them, the sky to the east brightened suddenly and then darkened as the first mushroom cloud stained the horizon.
Vivid stuff here! Hopefully fiction, right?
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Hopefully…
I’m glad you liked it!
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Chilling, but beautifully, powerfully written.
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Thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed it! I thought it was time to slip away from the 100% dialogue funnies for a story or two 🙂
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An evocative and moving story, Ali, if a terrible outcome. I pictured climate change/enviro disaster up until the very end, so great job shrouding it. FWIW, a few Americans are sane enough to try to reign our “president” in with regard to nuclear weapons. That’s another story entirely, though, ain’t it? Sigh.
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It’s a scary thought and things are kind of teetering at least close to the brink at the moment I think 😦
I’m glad you enjoyed my story!
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WOW. Goosebumps. That one took my breath away!
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That’ll be the nuclear blast 🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Eeek! Good-bye flowers, birds, trees. At least for awhile.
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Eventually it will all return – minus us pesky humans.
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Brilliant story Ali. Let’s hope it remains just that!
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Thanks! Definitely 🙂
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Been reading the news lately?
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Yup 😦
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Very scary and hopefully not true!
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I hope not too 😦
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Sad. Let’s hope it remains a fiction.
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For sure. A scary thought.
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Uh, oh. I guess many of us have that scenario in our minds these days. Good writing, Ali. —- Suzanne
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It’s hard not to. I’m glad you liked it!
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Dear Ali,
Chilling story. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Ali
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How sad! The ending is chilling! Great story Ali!
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Thanks! It is very sad 😦
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I have goose bumps too…can’t imagine a world without birdies..at least…Double Pawkiss 🙂 ❤
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That would be terrible 😦
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A truly chilling story, Ali. Nicely done. 🙂
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Thanks, it was time for a brief hiatus from comedy, I felt 🙂
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