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CWG Week 6 Episode 9

Here we are at week 6 of Kerrie’s Chain Writing Game! This week, Jadir has left the safety of his village and ventured over The Wall. What will he find?

Catch up with the story by clicking on the little blue froggy. My first contribution is below.


Jadir edged closer to the rope ladder and looked up to see a woman looking down at him. She was gesticulating, urging him to climb out of the pit, while keeping a wary eye on the two predators.

Jadir began to climb. As he reached the top he felt warm liquid spray across his back – the bear had ripped the bird’s head off, and was now moving toward the girl. She fished in a belt pouch and threw powder into the bear’s face. It gave a surprised growl, spun around and ran into a tree.

Jadir and the girl ran off through the woods.

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  1. Lyn
    February 2, 2014 at 9:18 am

    Thank goodness for bears and for girls with anti-bear powder in their belt pouch πŸ™‚
    This is an interesting story, even if it is only in small bites.


    • February 2, 2014 at 5:16 pm

      Handy stuff, that powder!
      The whole story will be written by Wednesday and then there will be a compilation to download on Kerrie’s site.


  2. Al
    February 2, 2014 at 10:17 am

    Haha .. there’s the first death πŸ˜‰ That was funny with it running into a tree


    • February 2, 2014 at 5:16 pm

      Maybe only stunned though. Definitely bewildered.


  3. February 2, 2014 at 1:53 pm

    Will the bear get up and continue the chase? Bear ran into a tree…makes a good visual.



  4. February 2, 2014 at 3:22 pm

    Nice! A lot of hikers could use bear repellent like that. Love that the bear ran into a tree. That’s some strong stuff! So now is this girl in a animal skin bikini and looks like Kristin Kreuk? πŸ˜‰


    • February 2, 2014 at 5:18 pm

      That’s exactly how I pictured her πŸ™‚


  5. February 2, 2014 at 4:50 pm

    Mystery woman and hints of civilization outside the wall in one short bite. Great add-on πŸ˜€


    • February 2, 2014 at 5:18 pm

      We need some more people in the story so we can start the killin’ πŸ™‚


      • February 2, 2014 at 5:23 pm

        She’s seems too important to kill off, but once they reach her village…then the games begin πŸ˜€


        • February 2, 2014 at 5:25 pm

          That’s what I was thinking – a whole village of cannon fodder!


  6. February 2, 2014 at 5:16 pm

    You just keep getting better!


  7. February 2, 2014 at 6:21 pm

    You are all so blood thirsty! πŸ˜›
    I feel so sorry for her village, if she has one πŸ˜‰

    Wonderful episode with a new character and some brilliant humour πŸ˜€


    • February 2, 2014 at 6:36 pm

      Everyone living in a dangerous forest should be packing anti-bear dust.


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