FF – Hard Times
Here is my story for Friday Fictioneers. Rochelle is our host and she also provided this week’s photo!
To read this week’s other stories, click on the blue froggy.

Copyright Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
Myron contemplated the dilapidated factories across the river. They used to be so busy, he mused. Back when there was money. No longer. Times were tough. With the closure of those factories, days of joy and laughter spent with his wife and son had become a hand-to-mouth existence.
Something had to give. Myron had taken action.
At least now there’s one less mouth to feed, he thought. As if on cue he saw a bundle being swept downriver.
“Samuel!” he yelled angrily. “Your mother’s floating off again. Fetch her back and this time use all your gym equipment to weigh her down!”
Bizarre and funny, like it a lot. 🙂
LikeLike
I’m glad you liked it! There’s nothing better to break melancholy reflections of the past than your dead wife floating past 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
😀 I don’t think that will ever catch on as an aphorism
LikeLike
Shame 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
She keeps floating to the top so she can rise up and drown him! LOL! Your dark humor is showing again, Ali! 😀
LikeLike
Heh, that would be a good bit of revenge 🙂
LikeLike
🙂
LikeLike
LOL!!
LikeLike
I like when people fully comprehend the meaning of “sacrifice!” 😀
LikeLike
She took one for the team 🙂
LikeLike
I shouldn’t laugh… but I did….
LikeLike
It did turn a bit comedic, didn’t it? 🙂
LikeLike
It did in its own dark way.
LikeLike
Oh my gosh! This story should come with a warning! I almost spewed coffee on my computer when I read the last line. Thanks for the laugh – I think!
LikeLike
“Warning – likelihood of sudden switch to comedy for next 3 paragraphs” 🙂
LikeLike
Funny.. dark. Good one.
LikeLike
Thanks!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ha! That’s too mean!! BUT funny, nonetheless. 😀 😀 😀
LikeLike
Hee! Every dark story needs a bit of comedy in my world 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
We’ll be looking for more of that from you, ALi! 😀
LikeLike
🙂
LikeLike
and ever one said they were such a nice, polite family! LOL!
LikeLike
But behind closed doors – murder most horrid 🙂
LikeLike
its the quiet ones you have to watch! 😀
LikeLike
🙂
LikeLike
Oh that made me laugh!
LikeLike
I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Savagely funny! 🙂
LikeLike
Thanks 🙂
LikeLike
One of your more bizarre pieces again, Ali. Looks like another of your dark humor periods. I certainly hope for everyone’s sake these examples are from your imagination and not from real life. It’s those killer video games again I bet. Well written, though. 😀 — Suzanne
LikeLike
Comedy dialogue is taking a bit of a break while I revisit my dark comedy roots 🙂 Maybe I should play fewer video games. I’m glad you liked it!
LikeLike
Oh me oh my!
I honestly didn’t want to believe he treated the situation so casually.
He needs help
😂😂dark humour well done.
LikeLike
Yeah, I think he’s a bit sociopathic 🙂
I’m glad you enjoyed it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
This one’s had me coffee snort through my nose, so thank you very much. 😉 Great, I really ddn’t see that coming.
LikeLike
Oops 🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed it even after the coffee mishap 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
I also almost spit my coffee all over the place when I read that last line! Way to really surprise us!
LikeLike
There seem to be a lot of coffee accidents going round 🙂
I’m glad you liked it!
LikeLike
Excellent! Immediate smile and appreciation. Well done!
LikeLike
Thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed it!
LikeLike
I often wondered why when recession strikes a town goes quiet, now I know.
LikeLike
Yes, behind closed doors there’s a culling… 🙂
LikeLike
He certainly took drastic action to ensure there was one less mouth to feed! Poor wifey. If I were Samuel, I’d be watching Myron like a hawk from now on. It could be him floating down the river next. Dark and funny – a great combination. 🙂
LikeLike
i bet it was more than hunger that drove him. he was suffering from mid-life crisis and looking for a younger replacement. 🙂
LikeLike
I think that too. He’s killed two birds with one stone!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Seems like such a waste of good food. Surely cannibalism can’t be far behind!
LikeLike
True, he missed a trick there! I can imagine him saying to his son, “Don’t come running to me telling me you’re hungry, you’re the one who refused to eat his mother.”
LikeLike
This is the third drowning in this week’s FF list and I have just been through 9 stories…what’s with you people? ha ha. Just joking. You made murder and a grim situation sound like a joke. Well done!
LikeLike
That’s what you get when there’s a body of water in the photo 🙂
I’m glad you liked it!
LikeLike
The mother? Oh, no! Brutal, Ali. Well told story.
LikeLike
Thanks! Yes, sadly she made the ultimate sacrifice (though not willingly).
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very funny. Thanks
LikeLike
I’m glad you liked it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sounds like laudable action; one less mouth to feed and one less mouth to annoy him, I guess.
LikeLike
Yes. I’m thinking it was the “annoying” that sealed her fate, “one less mouth to feed” was just a bonus!
LikeLike
“your mother’s floating pasr again” is a great line
LikeLike
Thanks!
LikeLike
Dear Ali,
You have seriously wicked streak. Too funny.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLike
Dear Rochelle,
I do! I’m glad you liked it!
Ali
LikeLike
I don’t know about this one. Mom’s deserve respect, after all they do have to put up with treacherous fathers.
Myron best watch out. Sons do grow up to be just like their fathers. Ha!
LikeLike
Yes, if times get harder he could be next!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh my….
LikeLike
Indeed 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
This reminds me of Hansel and Gretel…brutal way to get along!
LikeLike
Very!
LikeLike
Oh, you are powerfully cruel this week, young man! (hear Mother’s tone). Excellent writing, as usual! So wicked! 🙂
LikeLike
Thanks 🙂 Yep, Myron seems to have few morals. Quite a nasty piece of work!
LikeLiked by 1 person
That was such an unexpected ending! Excellent story, Ali. I love the dark humour. 🙂
LikeLike
Thanks, when I’m stuck for an ending I find there’s always a dark one lurking around somewhere I can use!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Horrible! I think that I broke my computer chair from laughing so hard!
LikeLike
Sorry about your chair, but I’m glad you liked it!
LikeLiked by 1 person