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Limerick Challenge – Dream

I thought I’d have another go at Mind and Life Matters’ Limerick challenge. This week’s word is “Dream“. I couldn’t get it to scan quite right, but here is my entry :-).

It’s good to have hopes and bigΒ dreams
Polish your life till it gleams
And if things go wrong
Try to burst into song
Think of kittens, ice cream and sunbeams!

I hope you enjoyed it! You can read other entries by clicking on the blue froggy.

 

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  1. March 22, 2016 at 7:34 pm

    Looks like I will try this fun challenge too Ali. Claps for your post!

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  2. March 22, 2016 at 8:01 pm

    Excellent advice in limerick form. 😊

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  3. March 22, 2016 at 8:53 pm

    I just read this one on Twitter and it made me laugh:

    There was a young man
    From Hull who got limericks
    And haikus confused

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  4. March 22, 2016 at 9:03 pm

    Great one, Ali! Kittens, ice cream and sunbeams are everyone’s dream πŸ™‚

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  5. March 22, 2016 at 9:12 pm

    I liked that a lot, Draliman! Didn’t know you wrote limericks, but you seem a natural.

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    • March 23, 2016 at 1:00 pm

      Thanks! Limericks are quite fun to write, trying to get the rhyming and scanning right.

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  6. March 23, 2016 at 12:34 am

    LOL! That is cute, Ali! I love it!

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  7. March 23, 2016 at 1:56 am

    I did just what you recommended…. only the ice cream melted in the sunbeam, and then the kittens licked it up and got sick and puked all over my nice new rug.

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  8. March 23, 2016 at 3:06 am

    Love it! You’re a limerick master! πŸ™‚

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  9. Lata Sunil
    March 23, 2016 at 6:08 am

    Its very cute poem. Will remember

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  10. Lyn
    March 23, 2016 at 9:40 am

    Are you sure you wrote this? LOL way too gentle and sweet πŸ˜€
    Love it!

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    • March 23, 2016 at 1:02 pm

      Great, now I’m trying to write a Limerick including “nightmares” rhyming with “falling down the stairs”…
      I’m glad you liked it!

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  11. March 23, 2016 at 1:06 pm

    Lovely, Ali. Now I’ll know what to do when I feel depressed. I’ll think of those things: kittens, ice cream, and sunbeams. That’s great. πŸ˜€ — Suzanne

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    • March 23, 2016 at 3:30 pm

      There’s nothing happier than those three things πŸ™‚

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  12. March 23, 2016 at 2:17 pm

    Such a happy message and limerick! πŸ™‚

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  13. March 23, 2016 at 5:50 pm

    Sounds like a plan for happiness! Job well done!

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    • March 24, 2016 at 7:55 am

      Thanks, kittens make nearly everyone smile πŸ™‚

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  14. March 23, 2016 at 6:25 pm

    A lovely message in limerick form, Ali! Thoughts of kittens, ice cream and sunbeams always make me smile. πŸ˜€

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  15. March 23, 2016 at 9:31 pm

    That’s if you like kittens, ice cream and sunbeams. Two out of three ain’t bad for me.

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    • March 24, 2016 at 7:59 am

      Substitute the third one with a happy thought of your choice πŸ™‚

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  16. March 24, 2016 at 6:24 pm

    Good limerick, a nice positive message πŸ™‚

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    • March 25, 2016 at 11:25 am

      Thanks, I’m glad you liked it!

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  17. March 25, 2016 at 5:21 pm

    Great advice in the form of a limerick! Ice cream and sunbeams yes, but I will think dogs instead of kittens πŸ˜€

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    • March 26, 2016 at 11:17 am

      You can feel free to insert the happy thought of your choice! It would have to be “puppies” rather than “dogs” to make it scan though but that’s okay because everyone loves puppies πŸ™‚

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  18. March 25, 2016 at 9:23 pm

    Well done… Your talents amaze me!

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  19. March 26, 2016 at 6:31 pm

    I like very much.
    XD

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  20. March 27, 2016 at 10:47 pm

    “Think of kittens, ice cream and sunbeams!” The cutest!! I should write this on one of my post-its in the office. Hmm.. can I add chocolates, puppies, and plain tees? πŸ˜€

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    • March 28, 2016 at 8:08 am

      You can add any of the things that make you smile πŸ™‚

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      • March 28, 2016 at 10:46 am

        I just posted them in my desk. πŸ˜‰ I’m all smiles today!! πŸ˜€

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      • March 28, 2016 at 11:05 am

        Yay πŸ™‚

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  21. March 28, 2016 at 10:35 pm

    Hey, that was a great Limerick. It flows beautifully and has a nice chirpy, cheerful theme. Good advice, too, if we want a happy life. Love the last line. πŸ™‚

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    • March 29, 2016 at 7:06 am

      Thanks! I don’t do many posts with happy happy joy joy in πŸ™‚

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