Pegman – Dark Days
Here is my story for What Pegman Saw, which this week sees us in Cordoba, Argentina.
I’m not sure what my story is this week. Is it post-apocalyptic? Dark almost-but-not-quite-humour? A damning indictment of the “haves” and the “have nots”? Bittersweet or just plain bitter? Nooobody knoooows.

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Juan gazed across the city at the skyscrapers. Every city had them – bastions of so-called civilisation amidst the ruins. The global drought and subsequent world-wide economic collapse had devastated the world. It hadn’t rained for three years.
Those few had the money to dig deep wells, desalinate water, grow crops. Not for the likes of him, of course. They didn’t have to drink boiled urine. They didn’t have to eat rat, though even the rats were dying out. That chap from down the street was starting to look pretty tasty.
He could leave the city, but Cordoba was his home. He’d been born here, and he’d die here. Probably fairly soon.
No – he mustn’t think like that. There was life, therefore there was hope! Feeling cheered, he ran across the road, chasing a feral cat.
He never saw the truck. Never felt the first drops of rain begin to fall.
Just be glad that climate change is a lie manufactured by the Chinese.
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You’ve been listening to that Trump again, haven’t you…
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Superb tale Ali.
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Thanks!
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Dear Ali
Definitely not humor…well…irony or dark humor perhaps. Bleak and well written.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
It was pretty grim. I’m glad you liked it!
Ali
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Wow. That’s, like, deep man. 🙂
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Yeah! Eat your robot heart out, InspiroBot 🙂
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I don’t know about you, but pizza inspires me. 🙂
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Hey, me too 🙂
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I had a funny feeling!
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🙂
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🙂
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True to life
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Sadly yes. Not yet quite so apocalyptic, though.
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I don’t know if Juan was lucky or unlucky. It depends on how you look at it. Good writing, Ali. 🙂 Suzanne
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It could be about to get a lot worse. At least he didn’t slowly starve to death. I’m glad you liked it!
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Hmph! It’s probably acid rain that’s starting to fall…he’s not missing anything. Truck probably did ‘im a favour 😀
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Lying in the road slowly dissolving while everyone runs around screaming. Lucky chap 🙂
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Dark and well-written. Plus, it makes any complaint I might have about the day seem small!
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Thanks!
Yes, no-one’s day is as bad as Juan’s 😦
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An excellently written story that I hope is not a portent of things to come!
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I hope not too! I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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Apocalyptic and bitter sweet. The humour is in there, if a little dark. Juan was far too aware of his situation. I wonder if the guy from down the road will eat Juan now instead of the other way round 🙂
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Ha, lucky chap down the street! Every cloud and all that 🙂
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I did laugh then thought “Oh! No!” when the truck fumbled in to view. Great story, Ali.
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It went from bad to worse for poor Juan 😦 I’m glad you liked it!
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A fascinating ending to a darkly humorous story. I love the ambiguity: would things have looked up because it was raining or was it better that he died quickly?
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Good question. I suspect it would have taken so long for the world to recover it was probably better for Juan to suffer a quick death. Thanks!
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Well thank goodness for that much needed rain. It’ll wash those nasty blood stains down the drains before they dry out and ruin the pavement…
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There’s nothing like a messy apocalypse to really annoy me.
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OMC that was dark, Draliman 😀 Pawkisses for a clear day 😀 ❤
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It was 😦
Have a fun day in your new garden 🙂
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The unhappy tone is belated by the happy ending missed. Nice one, Ali.
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Things could have been about to turn around for him. I’m glad you liked it!
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Well, that last line! That was a punch to the gut.Going through all that just to be carelessly mown down as the rain begins. Heartbreakingly well told
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I guess his enthusiasm for a nice tasty cat got the better of him 😦 I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Man’s gotta eat. Shame he didn’t remember his Green Cross Code though 🙂
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🙂
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The chap down the street has a chance now 😉 Sad story but there is always hope.
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Hopefully some will make it through to start rebuilding.
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Eek!
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Waaa 🙂
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