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FF – A Safe-ish Place

Here is my story for Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle. This week’s photo was contributed by Nathan Sowers, Dawn Miller’s grandson.

I quickly wrote this in my lunch break so that I at least had something, but had no time to write anything else.

Copyright Nathan Sowers, grandson of Dawn M Miller!

 

Have you ever woken up in the morning with little recollection of the night before? Was there perhaps a suspicious puncture wound on your neck?

Did you open your curtains to let the sunshine in, only for your head to burst into flames?

Did you check the fire damage in a mirror only to find you HAD NO REFLECTION?

If you’ve answered “yes” to all these questions, then Vampires Anonymous could be for you. If you’re newly turned and have nowhere else to go, pop along for a bite. You’re not alone!

Free blood and cookies at your first meeting!

 

  1. August 29, 2018 at 7:43 pm

    Lot’s at stake being a vampire… take precautions against garlic, crucifixes and holy water.

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  2. August 29, 2018 at 8:04 pm

    I’m tempted by the free cookies.

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  3. August 29, 2018 at 9:16 pm

    Oh shit!

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  4. August 29, 2018 at 9:24 pm

    As a matter of fact, that has happened! No reflection in my mirror! 🙂

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  5. August 29, 2018 at 11:21 pm

    I hope they have some blood pudding, yum!! 🙂

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    • August 30, 2018 at 7:01 am

      I bet they do! Fortunately we call it by its original name over here (black pudding) otherwise I probably would never have tried it. “Blood” pudding sounds too icky to we non-vampires 🙂

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  6. August 29, 2018 at 11:43 pm

    Maybe you should contact the people from Collinwood on ‘Dark Shadows’

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    • August 30, 2018 at 7:03 am

      I had to Google that but I did see the film years ago. It was great fun!

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  7. August 29, 2018 at 11:59 pm

    Free blood and cookies? I’m IN!

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  8. August 30, 2018 at 3:22 am

    So much fun!

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  9. August 30, 2018 at 6:02 am

    Ha ha ha, not bad for a quick bite, I mean write.

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  10. Lyn
    August 30, 2018 at 10:18 am

    He’ll probably be a bit long in the tooth before he ever finds a cure :p

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  11. August 30, 2018 at 11:16 am

    “Free blood and cookies at your first meeting!”

    Excellent line!

    See you —
    Neil S.

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    • August 30, 2018 at 11:34 am

      Thanks! Free stuff always brings in the crowds.

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  12. August 30, 2018 at 2:25 pm

    Yikes. Blood and cookies.

    I don’t think so, thank you 🙂

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  13. August 30, 2018 at 2:30 pm

    Mmmmmmmmmmm, chocolate clot cookies!

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    • August 30, 2018 at 3:48 pm

      It’s that burst of flavour when a clot bursts against your tongue that makes them the choice for the discerning vampire.
      I feel a bit ill now…

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  14. August 30, 2018 at 4:40 pm

    Love the flier format – its so matter of fact about those strange beings – Vampires..Especially the last line – ‘ Blood and cookies’ ! Well done.

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    • August 31, 2018 at 6:44 am

      It’s important information for those who “live in the shadows” 🙂

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  15. August 30, 2018 at 5:36 pm

    Cackling peals of laughter…. strange looks from librarian through the glass. Love it!

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  16. August 30, 2018 at 7:09 pm

    BRILLIANT!!!

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    • August 31, 2018 at 6:44 am

      Thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂

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  17. August 30, 2018 at 7:21 pm

    this is funny as it gets. well done.

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  18. August 31, 2018 at 9:25 am

    Fortunately, I’ve not experienced that, but if there are any cookies going…!

    Click to read my FriFic tale

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    • August 31, 2018 at 12:26 pm

      I’m sure there are. Washed down with a nice mug of o-neg!

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  19. August 31, 2018 at 1:03 pm

    Dear Ali,

    I’m usually not a fan of vampire stories but this one is hilarious. Love it!

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    • August 31, 2018 at 1:17 pm

      Dear Rochelle,
      I know you’re not a fan so I was quite curious to see what you’d make of it. I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
      Ali

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  20. August 31, 2018 at 2:27 pm

    Have been on the look-out for vampire tales and then two come along together. The exploding head sounds fun!

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  21. September 1, 2018 at 2:47 pm

    At last a story with a bite. Leaving that mirror outside is bad fang shui.

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    • September 1, 2018 at 3:09 pm

      Haha, nicely punned (twice!) 🙂

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  22. September 1, 2018 at 6:50 pm

    Actually, I thought I’d try Vampires Anonymous…

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  23. September 1, 2018 at 10:12 pm

    LOL…loved it. I’m so glad you had no time to write anything else. This one is a gem!

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    • September 2, 2018 at 6:15 am

      I had a couple of other ideas but had no time to try them out. This one worked out better than I expected when I was hammering it in and emailing it home, I’m glad you liked it!

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  24. September 2, 2018 at 3:39 am

    Very fun!

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  25. September 2, 2018 at 8:51 am

    Not bad for a quick lunch hour write! 🙂

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    • September 2, 2018 at 5:43 pm

      Thanks, I’m glad you liked it! I usually like to look at the picture first thing and then mull it over all day but things have just got too busy.

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  26. September 2, 2018 at 12:52 pm

    Yep, I’ve been to those places to give blood, free tea and biscuits. I wondered was the the only reason or was it to keep the long tradition of lore and fable about Vampires alive. I’ll admit some of the nurses did look a bit pale and kept out of the light.
    Good fun read.

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    • September 2, 2018 at 5:44 pm

      Now you know where all that blood ends up… I’m glad you liked it!

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  27. September 2, 2018 at 2:40 pm

    Love the personal ad format of this piece. Very humorous and clever.

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  28. September 2, 2018 at 4:54 pm

    Oh my goodness, so witty and as mentioned by others the ad idea was very creative. All done during your lunch … well done!

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    • September 2, 2018 at 5:47 pm

      Thanks! Once an idea pops into my head it only takes a few minutes to hammer it in 🙂 I’m glad you liked it!

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  29. September 2, 2018 at 5:06 pm

    Hilarious! 😀
    Can I take the cookies without the blood?

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    • September 2, 2018 at 5:47 pm

      Thanks!
      And, no. 🙂

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      • September 3, 2018 at 8:03 pm

        🙂
        Aw, shucks. (Not that I would hang around a bunch of vampires even if I COULD just have cookies. ;-))

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  30. September 2, 2018 at 6:03 pm

    Count me in for a bite, Draliman…and Granny for a Bloody Mary…MOL 😀 Extra Pawkisses 🙂 ❤

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    • September 3, 2018 at 6:47 am

      Mmm, a bloody Mary with real blood 🙂

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  31. September 3, 2018 at 4:24 pm

    This is priceless. I love every word of it.

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  32. September 3, 2018 at 5:28 pm

    Funny stuff, I’d like to see the TV advert for Vampires anonymous too.

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    • September 4, 2018 at 6:32 am

      Now that would be something! I’m playing it in my mind right now 🙂

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  33. September 4, 2018 at 7:15 pm

    You wrote that in your lunch break? I am soooooo jealous. Great fun and a wonderful caring advertising feel.

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    • September 5, 2018 at 6:49 am

      I’m glad you liked it! Stuff like this is fairly easy to write – no characters to worry about, no descriptions required 🙂

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      • September 5, 2018 at 7:06 am

        Easy to write?! You’re showing off again. 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

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