FF – All Aboard!
Here is my story for Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle. This week’s photo was contributed by Fatima Fakier Deria.
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Copyright Fatima Fakier Deria
Giggling, laughing, they climbed aboard, drinks in hand. Plenty more inside, and snacks too. Graduating High School, their whole lives ahead of them. Time for a party.
Little did they know, they’d booked the…
!!!Party Bus To Hell!!!
Starring
Jessica Lemons as “Chirpy Cheerleader”
Chuck Mason as “Popular Moronic Jock”
and introducing
Frankie Peanuts as “Underappreciated Nerd”
–This is a Ride Not to be Missed–
In cinemas now! Board the !!!Party Bus To Hell!!! – if you dare!
(Rated 18, some bad language, mild nudity, massive gratuitous violence, traumatic amputations, decapitations, arterial spurting, that sort of thing)
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HAHAHA! Not enough arterial spurting in films these days!
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Exactly! It’s like it’s gone out of fashion or something 🙂
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No thanks, I’ll walk.
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Party pooper 🙂
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No thanks. I’m gonna watch Shrek.
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It really is a riveting film, full of… okay, ya got me, Shrek is a much better watch 🙂
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And … while there are body parts (picked eyes, candled ear-wax, etc), it is far tamer than what I think yours would be … 😉
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Any seats left. I need a lift!
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Wait until about 20 minutes into the film, there will be plenty of seats left by then! A bit messy, though.
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I’ll wear that rubber suit you left last time you visited.
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Dude, that was supposed to be a secret…
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Don’t worry, I won’t tell a soul!
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Phew!
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Hilarious, but I’d be put off by the arterial spurting, I think 🙂
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I’m sure it’s “comical” arterial spurting. Like in “Tropic Thunder” 🙂
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Love it! Thanks for the laugh…and for also imagining a party bus. 🙂
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It’s definitely a party bus. You saw it too 🙂
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🙂
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A grim, grisly, gritty, gruesome, graphic, grave graduation tale.
(In flagrant defiance of Mark Twain’s “Kill the adjectives” rule.)
In spite of the awful subject, you’ve put together quite a creative ad.
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Nicely alliterated!
I bet you really want to see the film now, don’t you? 🙂
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You got me laughing out loud with this one. Excellent formatting of your story. I wonder how it ends? 😉
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How it ends? Badly, I would imagine 🙂
I’m glad you liked it!
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🙂
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Love the format! And… I think I shall watch something else…
Though I a still chuckling…
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Go on, give it a watch 🙂
The formatting took longer than the writing…
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I’ve no doubt!!
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I’ll give it a miss, I think. Nice style.
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I hear it’s awesome, though! I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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Ha ha – I love how you made this sound like so much fun!
Susan A Eames at
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That’s the job of a film’s PR company. Make lemonade out of a complete lemon 🙂
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Only mild nudity? Damn, I was hoping for full blown amputation porn…
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You’re thinking of a similar title, !!!Porny Bus to Hell!!!…
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Dear Ali,
No thanks. I’ll trade my fare to watch The Return of Mary Poppins, thank you very much. Although I’ll admit to giggling. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
If you like a giggle Mary Poppins is probably a better bet than my film 🙂
Ali
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Sounds like a sci-fi convention all-night movie room type film. A great room to catch a nice sleep if you can’t afford a room for the convention, though. Love this teaser. Now… which room are you showing it in, and can I bring my pillow?
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that is meant in a good way, Dude!
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🙂
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You’ll need the pillow to hide behind, this film is so scary!
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heheh!
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sounds promising. if it doesn’t win an oscar i don’t know what will. 🙂
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It’s a contender for sure!
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Hmmm … I think I’ll pass. Creative as always!
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You’ll miss all the “fun”!
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If I’m right, this didn’t play much in cinemas. It was really written for late-night (oh, alright, the 3 a.m. slot) movies on niche TV channels…
Creative take on the prompt, Ali!
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Sadly it was a bit of a box office flop. Can’t imagine why 🙂
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This film should be popular with high schoolers. The studios probably have departments stocked with experts in gratuitous violence, including arterial spurting and beheadings. I love the title. That should pack them in. You’ve done it again, Ali. 😀 — Suzanne
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I’d watch it 🙂 I’m glad you liked it!
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Biggest laugh of my day! Bring on the popcorn!
Here’s mine!
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It’s supposed to be horrifically scary 😉
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Very creative take on the prompt😀
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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Think you’re a born advertising copy writer ! Who could resist traumatic amputations for a start ?
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I know, right? That’s a real crowd-pleaser 🙂
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Hope its out in time for Christmas! 🙂
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It’ll be my new favourite Christmas movie! So long, Die Hard 🙂
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Brilliant take on the prompt – and sounds like a movie that I don’t want to watch. Arterial spurting made me chuckle.
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It always make me chuckle too heh 🙂
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I don’t think I’m old enough to watch that one. I’ll wait for your review 🙂
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I don’t think anyone is old enough to watch this one 🙂
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I can actually see this getting made. Hollywood is running out if idea… 😀
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I’m sure it has been made, and will be made many times again 🙂
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Wait a minute… high school graduates are usually under 18, so they won’t be allowed aboard! Oops. 😉
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Oh no! Is High School not immediately prior to university? You’d be at least 18 in this country. Easily old enough to get drunk and then horribly slaughtered… 🙂
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Correction: SOME high school graduates – those whose birthdays fall in the second half of the year – are not yet 18. In most of Canada, one can’t drink legally until the age of 19!
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That sounds like a year difference to us. I was born just after the previous year’s cutoff for school so I was one of the oldest in my class. I turned 19 during freshers’ week.
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Ah… interesting!
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Count me in! To the cinemaaaa!!!
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It’s a slaughterfest of fun! Get the popcorn in!
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LOL…I’m pretty sure my ex husband #2 would have LOVED this movie!
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What’s not to love? 🙂
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Yep, that’s a teen horror movie alright. I enjoyed this unique take on the prompt. Very creative.
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Thanks! It’s a film we’ve all seen many times, I bet. Makes me want to watch Scream again 🙂
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