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FF – All Aboard!

Here is my story for Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle. This week’s photo was contributed by Fatima Fakier Deria.

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Giggling, laughing, they climbed aboard, drinks in hand. Plenty more inside, and snacks too. Graduating High School, their whole lives ahead of them. Time for a party.

Little did they know, they’d booked the…


!!!Party Bus To Hell!!!



Jessica Lemons as “Chirpy Cheerleader”
Chuck Mason as “Popular Moronic Jock”
and introducing
Frankie Peanuts as “Underappreciated Nerd”


–This is a Ride Not to be Missed–


In cinemas now! Board the !!!Party Bus To Hell!!!if you dare!


(Rated 18, some bad language, mild nudity, massive gratuitous violence, traumatic amputations, decapitations, arterial spurting, that sort of thing)


  1. December 4, 2019 at 8:20 pm

    HAHAHA! Not enough arterial spurting in films these days!


    • December 5, 2019 at 7:52 am

      Exactly! It’s like it’s gone out of fashion or something 🙂


  2. December 4, 2019 at 8:45 pm

    No thanks, I’ll walk.


  3. December 4, 2019 at 8:56 pm

    No thanks. I’m gonna watch Shrek.


    • December 5, 2019 at 7:57 am

      It really is a riveting film, full of… okay, ya got me, Shrek is a much better watch 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      • December 5, 2019 at 2:36 pm

        And … while there are body parts (picked eyes, candled ear-wax, etc), it is far tamer than what I think yours would be … 😉

        Liked by 1 person

  4. December 4, 2019 at 9:39 pm

    Any seats left. I need a lift!


  5. December 4, 2019 at 10:21 pm

    Hilarious, but I’d be put off by the arterial spurting, I think 🙂


    • December 5, 2019 at 8:00 am

      I’m sure it’s “comical” arterial spurting. Like in “Tropic Thunder” 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  6. December 5, 2019 at 1:59 am

    Love it! Thanks for the laugh…and for also imagining a party bus. 🙂


  7. December 5, 2019 at 2:33 am

    A grim, grisly, gritty, gruesome, graphic, grave graduation tale.
    (In flagrant defiance of Mark Twain’s “Kill the adjectives” rule.)
    In spite of the awful subject, you’ve put together quite a creative ad.


    • December 5, 2019 at 8:03 am

      Nicely alliterated!
      I bet you really want to see the film now, don’t you? 🙂


  8. December 5, 2019 at 4:14 am

    You got me laughing out loud with this one. Excellent formatting of your story. I wonder how it ends? 😉


  9. December 5, 2019 at 4:33 am

    Love the format! And… I think I shall watch something else…
    Though I a still chuckling…


    • December 5, 2019 at 8:08 am

      Go on, give it a watch 🙂
      The formatting took longer than the writing…


  10. December 5, 2019 at 10:07 am

    I’ll give it a miss, I think. Nice style.


    • December 5, 2019 at 12:39 pm

      I hear it’s awesome, though! I’m glad you liked it 🙂


  11. December 5, 2019 at 11:54 am

    Ha ha – I love how you made this sound like so much fun!

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos


    • December 5, 2019 at 12:40 pm

      That’s the job of a film’s PR company. Make lemonade out of a complete lemon 🙂


  12. December 5, 2019 at 12:09 pm

    Only mild nudity? Damn, I was hoping for full blown amputation porn…


    • December 5, 2019 at 12:41 pm

      You’re thinking of a similar title, !!!Porny Bus to Hell!!!…


  13. December 5, 2019 at 2:34 pm

    Dear Ali,

    No thanks. I’ll trade my fare to watch The Return of Mary Poppins, thank you very much. Although I’ll admit to giggling. 😉




    • December 5, 2019 at 6:47 pm

      Dear Rochelle,
      If you like a giggle Mary Poppins is probably a better bet than my film 🙂


  14. bearmkwa
    December 5, 2019 at 8:56 pm

    Sounds like a sci-fi convention all-night movie room type film. A great room to catch a nice sleep if you can’t afford a room for the convention, though. Love this teaser. Now… which room are you showing it in, and can I bring my pillow?


    • bearmkwa
      December 5, 2019 at 8:57 pm

      that is meant in a good way, Dude!


    • December 6, 2019 at 9:29 pm

      You’ll need the pillow to hide behind, this film is so scary!

      Liked by 1 person

  15. December 5, 2019 at 11:27 pm

    sounds promising. if it doesn’t win an oscar i don’t know what will. 🙂


  16. December 6, 2019 at 1:12 am

    Hmmm … I think I’ll pass. Creative as always!


  17. December 6, 2019 at 10:27 am

    If I’m right, this didn’t play much in cinemas. It was really written for late-night (oh, alright, the 3 a.m. slot) movies on niche TV channels…
    Creative take on the prompt, Ali!


    • December 6, 2019 at 9:33 pm

      Sadly it was a bit of a box office flop. Can’t imagine why 🙂


  18. December 6, 2019 at 11:25 am

    This film should be popular with high schoolers. The studios probably have departments stocked with experts in gratuitous violence, including arterial spurting and beheadings. I love the title. That should pack them in. You’ve done it again, Ali. 😀 — Suzanne


    • December 6, 2019 at 9:33 pm

      I’d watch it 🙂 I’m glad you liked it!


  19. December 6, 2019 at 12:15 pm

    Biggest laugh of my day! Bring on the popcorn!

    Here’s mine!


  20. December 6, 2019 at 3:09 pm

    Very creative take on the prompt😀


  21. December 6, 2019 at 8:05 pm

    Think you’re a born advertising copy writer ! Who could resist traumatic amputations for a start ?


    • December 6, 2019 at 9:34 pm

      I know, right? That’s a real crowd-pleaser 🙂


  22. December 6, 2019 at 9:21 pm

    Hope its out in time for Christmas! 🙂


    • December 6, 2019 at 9:35 pm

      It’ll be my new favourite Christmas movie! So long, Die Hard 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  23. December 6, 2019 at 9:42 pm

    Brilliant take on the prompt – and sounds like a movie that I don’t want to watch. Arterial spurting made me chuckle.


  24. December 7, 2019 at 4:35 am

    I don’t think I’m old enough to watch that one. I’ll wait for your review 🙂


    • December 8, 2019 at 6:38 am

      I don’t think anyone is old enough to watch this one 🙂


  25. December 7, 2019 at 6:56 am

    I can actually see this getting made. Hollywood is running out if idea… 😀


    • December 8, 2019 at 6:38 am

      I’m sure it has been made, and will be made many times again 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  26. December 8, 2019 at 6:40 pm

    Wait a minute… high school graduates are usually under 18, so they won’t be allowed aboard! Oops. 😉


    • December 9, 2019 at 7:45 pm

      Oh no! Is High School not immediately prior to university? You’d be at least 18 in this country. Easily old enough to get drunk and then horribly slaughtered… 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      • December 9, 2019 at 8:19 pm

        Correction: SOME high school graduates – those whose birthdays fall in the second half of the year – are not yet 18. In most of Canada, one can’t drink legally until the age of 19!


        • December 10, 2019 at 7:20 pm

          That sounds like a year difference to us. I was born just after the previous year’s cutoff for school so I was one of the oldest in my class. I turned 19 during freshers’ week.

          Liked by 1 person

  27. December 9, 2019 at 12:14 am

    Count me in! To the cinemaaaa!!!


  28. December 9, 2019 at 6:25 am

    LOL…I’m pretty sure my ex husband #2 would have LOVED this movie!


  29. December 9, 2019 at 6:30 pm

    Yep, that’s a teen horror movie alright. I enjoyed this unique take on the prompt. Very creative.


    • December 9, 2019 at 7:50 pm

      Thanks! It’s a film we’ve all seen many times, I bet. Makes me want to watch Scream again 🙂


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