FF – Maestro
Here is my story for Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle. The photo this week was contributed by John Nixon and is another repeat. Before my time, however, so it’s new to me.
It’s a mad-looking picture so I’ve written a mad story. Perhaps next week this crazy writing will end and I’ll manage a more sensible story :-).
For this week’s other entries, click on the blue froggy.

Copyright John Nixon
His fingers flew across the keys, sweat glistening, heart pumping faster and faster, breathing becoming laboured… he lost himself, becoming one with the piano itself, impossible to tell where one ended and the other began.
With a flourish, he hit the final triumphant chord, turned, gave a quick bow and collapsed, exhausted, into his seat.
His audience looked on, faces blank. Finally, one of them spoke.
“That’s all very well, Mr Davis, but where were you on the night of the fourteenth between nine and eleven pm?”
Note to self: Interview Room 1 is no place for a piano. Move to canteen.
A very important note to self, if I do say so.
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Especially if you want a confession 🙂
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Passionate pianist found…now they just have to find the killer!
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Yes, looks like they’ve caught the wrong dude, sadly :-). And all that time spent listening to his performance when they could have been out looking for the real culprit.
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I guess they were too polite to interrupt his spirited performance. 🙂
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🙂
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I was not expecting that! 🙂
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Me neither!
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That’s one crazy police department, Ali. Perhaps he committed murder because the person didn’t appreciate his piano playing. He seems really caught up in it. Hilarious. Well done once again. 😀 — Suzanne
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He does seem the unbalanced sort so that’s possible! I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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I didn’t see that coming!
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When you can’t think of an ending, write something crazy…
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ha ha. Didn’t expect that end. Well done!
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It was a surprise ending to everyone!
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I have to say the same as the last four readers…I did not see that coming. Loved the story.
I’ve seen that prompt somewhere before. It was a couple of years ago I think.
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I think I saw from Rochelle’s it was mid-2013, a couple of weeks before I began my FF experience!
The ending was a surprise to me too 🙂
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Excuse me for being repetitious but I also didn’t expect such a brilliant end. Perfectly sensible and the canteen is the place indeed!
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The ending did come a bit out of “left field”. Crazy brain day 🙂
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It was clever!
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🙂
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I love your note at the end. I have sometimes wondered if one day, I will fuse with my computer’s hard drive. It could happen.
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I bet we’re not many decades away from implanted enhancement technology…
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I didn’t see that coming! Clever.
My 100 words!
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I wasn’t sure how I was going to end it either 🙂
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Amusing piece, sir
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Thanks!
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Geez! This reminds me of Jack the Ripper- only Sickert was an artist. Haha. Clever take, Ali.
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Hee! You’ve got watch these creative and talented types…
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Oh oh..caught! 😀 Pawkisses for a Happy Day 🙂 ❤
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Yep! He won’t be having a happy day 😦
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That… was an unexpected twist. Bravo, Ali! I’m going to be laughing at this one all day.
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Yeah, bit of a surprise! This is what happens when I can’t think of an ending for my stories…
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If that’s the result of you not knowing how to end a story, may you ever remain befuddled! 🙂
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🙂
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Crazy and hilarious. The dry note in the end tops it up perfectly.
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I don’t think the police officer was all that happy about the situation. I’m glad you liked it!
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Ha.. but I think it could be a way to be classified insane… (if that’s your preference)
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Me, Mr Davis, or both? 🙂
Insanity’s always a good defence.
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It’s like this, it sounds to me like they got the wrong guy, I don’t think. Loved it.
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If he starts playing again, they might just let him go anyway :-). I’m glad you liked it!
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Great build-up to a crazy twist ending! Loved it!!!
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Thanks! I wanted to draw people in with the intensity of his playing before the big surprise ending 🙂
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Ah.. Important note to self.. Funny.
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Let’s hope he acts on it. I’m glad you liked it!
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if anything, he could play the piano well. can he play them, too? that’s the question. 🙂
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He’ll have them wrapped around his little finger, I’m thinking!
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Would being stuck inside of a piano on the hours in question make a credible alibi?
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Only if he has witnesses…
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How he got the piano into the interview room is a bigger mystery than where he was on the night of the fourteenth. 😀
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Big piano, small door…
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Hey, crazy pic, crazier story. I half-thought he’d end up in the orchestra pit, stick in a tuba bell.
Of all the FF pictures we have received, this one was, for me, the most difficult. I could tell it was for you, too. Good job!
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Yeah, I just stared at it and thought, “what am I going to write for this one?” Its first appearance was mere weeks before I started FF so I couldn’t even re-post!
Glad you liked it anyway!
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The image of becoming ‘one with the piano’ just doubles me up – and the ending is just perfect. Another excellently ‘mad’ story for a ‘mad’ prompt. 🙂
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I’m so desperate to write a sensible story but the photos keep getting crazier 🙂
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I’ll sound a drumroll on the day you write a ‘sensible’ story! Crazy ones suit your style, and we all love to read them. :))
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🙂
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🙂 That was very unexpected, and absurdly funny. I like the Absurd, a LOT!
That piano-player might have tried to sway the fuzz with Art, but the Law is pretty single-minded.
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Yes, they didn’t sound too impressed by his little performance! I’m glad you liked it, it was pretty absurd 🙂
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Surreal!
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Quite in keeping with the photo I felt!
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That was a bit bonkers, as indeed is that picture. Totally unexpected laugh out loud ending!
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That picture required something silly I thought. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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LOL…that’s just silly!
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Silly and absurd. Like the photo 🙂
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Dear Ali,
Everyone’s a music critic. Cute story. You do silly and absurd well.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
His impromptu performance isn’t going to help his case!
Thanks.
Ali
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I like your twist! “One with the piano,” indeed! I can see this on a Dateline or 48 Hours episode exploring the psychology of the killer–which must be interesting!
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This chap will certainly provide at least one publication for an enterprising psychologist!
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Oh my goodness, what a fine story! Love it 🙂
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I’m glad you liked it, it’s a bit mad 🙂
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