FF – The Great Mafesto
Here is my story for Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle. This week’s photo was contributed by Priya Bajpal.
Copyright Priya Bajpal
The Great Mafesto growled. The sink was full of shells again and his favourite cocktail had transformed into an ornament. Those damn pixies, always causing trouble!
The Great Mafesto looked high and low and found the pixie hiding in a corner giggling. He clicked his fingers and the pixie shrieked, bursting into flames. No-one makes fun of the Great…
TOMMY! The toilet’s blocked! If you’ve been shoving shells down the sink again, young man, so help me I’ll…
The Great Mafesto made a hasty exit through the French windows, cleverly escaping the wrath of the Monumentous Magnificent Mother…
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Ha ha – lovely little story!
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Thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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What a fun read!
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Hee, thanks 🙂
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Funny. 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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Mermaid-approved! I could not imagine what was going to happen! 😀
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There should be a special little badge for mermaid-approved posts 🙂
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Kids. They have the most amazing excuses 🙂
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It’s all in play, mum!
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I think there might be a possibility that the Great Mafesto will be grounded soon… Nice take.
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I think you’re right!
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Aha! Gave me such a grin when I worked out who the great mafesto was haha!
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I’m glad you got a grin out of my little story 🙂
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If he thinks he’s in trouble now, just wait until the Momentous Magnificent Mother notices the charred remains of a pixie in the corner…
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It might have been a possum, to be honest…
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Drat. And now the possum pixie can’t even be disposed of down the toilet…
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Just vacuum him up…
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Wonderful.
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Thanks!
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Simply delightful!
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I’m glad you liked it!
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I’ve read this three times and smiled every time! Loved it.
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Aw, thanks for a such a lovely comment and I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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An enchanting tale. Reminded me of Calvin & Hobbs in a way.
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Thank! I’m a big fan of Calvin and Hobbes 🙂
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You made me smile. I’ve been that mum!
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Ha ha! Kids, eh? 🙂
I’ll read your story as soon as Google lets me – there’s some sort of certificate error it’s telling me, and it won’t allow me on the page 😦
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Hilarious … for some reason reminded me of sneaky Calvin (& Hobbs). =)
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I’m glad you liked it! I enjoy reading Calvin’s latest adventures with his favourite stuffed toy 🙂
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Run, Mafesto, run!
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No-one can catch the Great Mafesto… um, hi Dad, didn’t see you there…
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sweet stuff…
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I’m glad you liked it!
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boys will be boys. hopefully, he’ll grow up soon for his own sake. 🙂
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I’m sure he’ll soon learn 🙂
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He is probably a speshell child. Glad he clammed up and escaped the wrath of the mother.
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I’m sure she’ll be waiting for him when he comes home for his tea 🙂
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Dear Ali,
Oh dear. This could be Walter Mitty as a child. Cute on. When my kids were younger, one of them flushed his older brother’s Star Wars action figures. We had to use the neighbor’s facilities for a few hours.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
I’m glad you liked it!
I’m more upset about the travesty of flushing Star Wars memorabilia than your toilet facilities. Oh no, please, not Han Solo too, please, no 🙂
Ali
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This made me laugh out loud! Thank you. Wonderful take on the prompt.
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I’m glad it made you laugh 🙂
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Lovely imaginary friend hijinks! Reminds me of the movie, “Drop Dead Fred.” Looks like mom has her hands full!
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He’s driving her nuts I think, poor mum!
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That was fun!
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I’m glad you liked it!
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Ha! Wonderful story. I love it.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Wonderfully done, Alistair.
Methinks the Monumentous Magnificent Mother is not amused…
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Methinks you are correct and will be waiting for the Great Mafesto when he comes home for his tea 🙂
I’m glad you liked it!
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Oh, she will, without a doubt… 😀
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This gave me a good laugh. Very cute story, and I’m afraid the future of the great Mafesto is somewhat restricted.
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I think you’re right. It’s going to be chores and homework for a while 🙂
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LOL…a child’s imagination is the best (except of course whne it clogs the toilet) but besides that…the best!
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Ha, it’s all fun and games until the toilet stops working 🙂
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Haha, is it based on your childhood memories? 😉
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Hee, I’m saying nothing 😉
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Tommy can’t escape from MMM’s wrath for long…
Cute story!
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Only until teatime! I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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Very funny, reminds me of Calvin
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Cool, I like Calvin and Hobbes!
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That’s a fun take. I enjoyed it, thoroughly.
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked it!
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As usual, you made me smile. Fun story.
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Thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Two-feet ..they’re all the same…MOL😹Pawkisses for a Happy Wednesday🐾😽💞
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Always causing trouble 🙂
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