FF – The Glass World
Here is my story for Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle. She also contributed the photo this week.
I was worried this week as I’m out at the cinema later and will have no time to think of a story, but I had an idea the instant I saw the photo and the story was finished ten minutes later. I love it when a plan comes together 🙂

Copyright Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
He looked sadly, resigned, at the flowers. Once so vibrant, they had taken on a different kind of beauty. Harsh, rigid, eternal.
Already he could feel the bioweapon coursing through his veins. His legs hung heavy from the edge of the chair, opalescent, a multi-coloured perfection no glass-blower could hope to replicate.
His mistake, of course, had been to add the pathogen to the water supply, free to infect every living thing, a misguided protest at the folly of Man now become Mankind’s end.
On reflection, testing the antidote before releasing the virus would have been a good idea, too.
Still, everything will be beautiful in this dead world
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Yes – I had hoped to finish on that but the word count got to me…
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Laughing.
Testing the antidote would have been the smart move!
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Yep! But who has time for that?
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The man is a genius in the art of afterthought.
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Aren’t we all? 🙂
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Yes, he should have tested it. Also I thought “resignedly- would be a better fit. What say? Good writing, nevertheless.
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Thanks! I did consider that as the flow isn’t quite right, but “resignedly” is such a clumsy word.
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Dear Ali,
Hoisted up on his own petard. Hindsight’s always 20/20. Nicely done. Enjoy the cinema.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
He did make rather a mess of things!
Thanks – we saw “Alita: Battle Angel” – lots of action!
Ali
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He wasn’t the sharpest pencil in the box. Beauty with no one to see it. Sigh. 😦 — Suzanne
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For sure. No, no-one left to appreciate his “creation”.
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You’ve written a grimly humorous tale, and it had me chuckling.
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Thanks! I wanted to do a serious one but couldn’t resist come the end 🙂
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I’m guessing from his level of incompetence he was formerly a world leader or manager of a large corporation.
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The only severance in this case will be his limbs though!
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Talk about a monumental OOPS! That would be it! Awesome story!
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked it!
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Beauty is in the eye of ………….oops!
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Smash 🙂
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Hoist with his own petard, as the saying goes. How strange to watch one’s own body undergo such a change.
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Quite interesting in a gruesome kind of way!
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Excellent take on the photo!
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked it!
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Yep, shoulda tested the antidote! =)
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Who has the time? 🙂
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Lovely stained glass beings everywhere. The planet saved but nothing left alive. Goofball tragedy.
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At least it’s going to look very pretty for any visiting aliens!
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Hindsight’s a great thing! Great read.
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It is! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Some just don’t know how to prepare…
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Yeah, measure once, cut twice and all that 😉
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Haha! Right!
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Ya think? lol
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🙂
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His bad. lol
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He’d hold his hands up to it if they hadn’t already turned to glass 🙂
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Test, and then retest, … Enjoyed!
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Evidently his faith in the antidote was somewhat misplaced!
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Bah, testing is for sissies!
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Yeah, good old-fashioned live test is what’s needed!
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It’s a good think I drink soda and not water. Wait…. what is happening? Aw, dammit!
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Don’t tell me there’s water in fizzy pop…
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It seemed a good idea at the time! I an almost see his glazed expression!
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Immortalised forever, glazed and shiny!
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A genius in his own mind… Once removed… Nice write!
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Ha ha 🙂
I’m glad you liked it!
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Mistake he has done by infecting water supply and not making sure antidote works. A diabolical mind sometimes make mistake.
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And he thought he was being so clever.
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Ah, such arrogance of scientific madmen. Well told.
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It could never happen to me, I’m far too clever… 🙂
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I thought so, we are all safe in your hands.
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Shit!! ooops! hindsight etc…
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Oops, my bad! (smash)
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at least, he should take a selfie before it’s too late. 🙂
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Immortalise the beauty of it all 🙂
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Nicely done Ali- –scarey that mankind’s future is in the hands of this guy….oh dear !
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Thanks! Scary indeed, he doesn’t seem to think everything through all the way 🙂
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I swear, I did not read your story before I wrote mine! Great horrifying fun, yours is. Your and my protagonist seem to be related…
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Even geniuses have their weak moments. On the positive side he will be able to perfect the glassy eyed stare.
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Ha, every cloud has a silver lining 🙂
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Evil Genius in his mind only…well, what was his mind.
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His deluded mind, now immortalised forever in glass.
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I think I’ll stick to bottled water tonight … 😉
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Very wise 🙂
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Me wise woman (sometimes… ;))
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🙂
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I really like the way you used the prompt! The picture also made me think of how ugly eternal “beauty” would be, but I decided to go with a light-hearted story instead. Excellent storytelling.
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked it! I’m not a big fan of plastic (especially) and glass flowers.
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I definitely agree — checking the cure might have been a good choice. On the other hand, when the aliens find earth, it will be just lovely and shiny.
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It’ll be a thing of beauty, in a tragic sort of way.
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Ten minutes and you came up with this? Really? I’m jealous. It’s a great story. I love it.
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Sometimes it takes all day to think of an idea, I got lucky with this one 🙂 I’m glad you liked it!
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So in the end he would not be left all alone in a world to be shattered … maybe that’s a good thing.
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No. He really really didn’t think this through.
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Edifying tale 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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It might have been quite a useful thing to have on the checklist indeed…
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I’m sure I’m forgetting something… nah, I’m sure it wasn’t important…
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Oops. He sounds a bit short-sighted.
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People who can’t see any further forward than the next 10 minutes have no business executing nefarious master plans.
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lol
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This One’s Actually Good!
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Thanks!
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