FF – Roses
Here is my story for Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle. This week’s photo was contributed by David Stewart.
Smiling ruefully, he realised he’d made two lunches again. Sometimes he thought he could hear her. Any little noise in the house, in the garden. Like she was still there.
Sometimes he forgot she was gone.
She had been a good wife. She kept the house well. If only she hadn’t been such a nag. Do this, do that, you’re lazy, lazy!
It was enough to drive a man to murder.
Shrugging, he shuffled over to the back window. His rose bushes were flourishing. Ironically, though she hadn’t been much of a gardener in life, his wife made fantastic fertiliser.
Categories: Fiction
flash fiction, Friday Fictioneers
Yikes!
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Yikes indeed!
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That high fibre diet worked wonders!
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He’d been prepping her for years!
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That seems to have worked out rather nicely for them both
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For him and the rose bushes, yes!
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i guess you can only push somebody so far. 😦
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He seems to have a shorter fuse than most 😦
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Oh, dear! Nagging can be deadly! 😀
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It can 😮
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This was hilarious and well-written.
Poor wife. She was good for shit 😅😅😅
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Haha, yes! I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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I like a story with a happy ending!
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I always like to provide my readers with a happy and uplifting experience!
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Oh dear.
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Oh dear indeed 😮
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Oh dear, that twist turned my chair. Well done.
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Thanks, I’m glad your chair was turned 🙂
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I like the way you’ve shown that your MC is elderly, by his absentmindedness and the way he ‘shuffles’ to the back window.
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Thanks, that’s exactly how I was imagining him.
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Oh boy. What a twist. Fertiliser!! It doesn’t pay to be a nagger.
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It does not indeed, not in his house!
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Strange dichotomy between affection and murder. I hope it was a painless death.
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I’m sure it was 😉
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I knew where that was going. But it’s good to see that after so many years of her treating him like shit, that he is now treating her like literal shit…
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I had a choice of two similar stories, so I went for the murder…
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Blood and bone, I swear by it for lawns.
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There’s nothing better 🙂
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Still, I’m sure the extra lunch won’t go to waste.
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I’m sure it won’t. I’d certainly eat it if I accidentally made an extra lunch.
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Dear Ali,
I hate to admit it but I let out a hearty chuckle at the last line.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
It’s that old dark humour 🙂
Ali
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Good long term fertilizer… beware of the thorns, though! Fun take.
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Her thorny afterdeath revenge 🙂
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It’s never too late to find one’s purpose.
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It’s always nice to be useful 🙂
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She was good for something!
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Yep!
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