Pegman – The Horde
Here is my story for What Pegman Saw. This week we are in the Dominican Republic, which shares an island with Haiti.

Copyright Andy Javier Garcia Hidalgo and Google
The soldiers shifted nervously as the first of the Horde came into sight. Crossing the border from the voodoo country of Haiti, the Horde shuffled forwards, dead eyes cast downward. Some bumped unseeing into trees, other tripped and fell only to pick themselves up and continue their inexorable march.
General Diego picked up his radio. “They are come. Initiate Operation Repel.”
Sergeant Manuel took a deep breath, glanced at his fellows and pushed a button.
The leading edge of the Horde stopped. At first confused, frantically waving their arms in the air as if searching for something, terror soon set in. They turned, screaming and fled back towards Haiti. Finally, all had gone.
General Diego sighed. “I hate having to do that. But they just wander mindlessly about, spending no money, glued to YouTube. Not the type of tourist we want. And if switching off the mobile phone signal sends them running back across the border…”
The build up was as tense as the punchline was hilarious. LOVE IT!
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Thanks, I was hoping to describe both types of “zombie” without giving the game away 🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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That was great, Alistair!
Talk about great last lines… you had a fabulous last paragraph!
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked it! Getting the last paragraph right was the trickiest bit 🙂
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And you did it very well!
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Thank you 🙂
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Made me laugh. Really well done with that ending!
Note to self: Watch out for trees when absorbed in reading all those FFF posts. 🙂
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It’s a good idea to glance up occasionally 🙂
I’m glad you liked it!
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Stupendous, and I didn’t see it coming, just like the zombies!
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There’s nothing like lack of a mobile signal to panic the yoof of today!
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ha-ha-ha! Great build-up and hilarious ending! 😀
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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Dear Ali,
You did a great job of painting the picture of the Horde…zombies with their cell phones. A little more subtle than your usual fare, but equally effective. You made me laugh out loud.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
I’m glad you liked it! Watching people shuffling around glued to their mobile phones does put one in mind of zombies 🙂
Ali
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Great!
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Thanks!
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Just great. Loved the build up of suspense and the kicker at the end🤣
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Thanks, that’s what I was aiming for 🙂
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Oh this was really very cool 😀
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I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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Hahahaha! That’s one way to get tourists to go back home! LOL!
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I wonder if it works with house guests who have outstayed their welcome? 🙂
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Hahahaha! Probably!
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Can we send everyone like that to Haiti? I’m sure the island can be made larger if necessary…
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But there’ll be nobody left…
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Except me and an older couple in their late 90’s. It’ll be fun having the rest of the world to myself…
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Hahaha – love the twist at the end! You’ve outdone yourself, Ali. 😁
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Thanks, I worked hard to keep it hidden until the end 🙂
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Tourism isn’t what it used to be…
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Sadly not. Action must be taken.
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Ha, ha. Hilarious, Ali. Great twist 😀 — Suzanne
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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I was expecting a twist, but not that one. Great. 🙂
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Thanks, I tried hard to keep it hidden until the end 🙂
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That was one hell of a punch line. Loved it Ali. Totally got me. My ribs are cracking with laughter.
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Ha, thanks, I’m glad you liked it!
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