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FF – Unfinished

Here is my story for Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle. This week’s photo was contributed by Alicia Jamtaas.

Copyright Alicia Jamtaas

“Dude.”

“Dooooode.”

“Hee hee!”

“This is some fine weed, man. Fiiiine.”

“Reeeeeal mellow.”

Puff puff

“I think… I think… I can see time!”

“What does it look like, man?”

“Like, like, swirly whirly colours. Real pretty.”

Puff puuuuuffffff

“I can taste my soul!”

“Far out.”

“I keep thinking we’ve forgotten something.”

“Like what?”

“Like, something we started but didn’t finish.”

“Don’t sweat it, man. Chill.”

Puff. Puff. Puuuufffff.

“Like, if we haven’t finished something, it’s probably okay, right?”

“Yeah, like, what’s the worst that could possibly happen?”

Puff puff puff

KA-BOOM! CRASH! WHOOMP!

“Dude.”

“Dude.”

Puff

  1. February 10, 2021 at 8:12 pm

    LOL! Those dudes just went up in a puff of smoke.

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  2. February 10, 2021 at 9:00 pm

    Will be some time before reality crashes in for these two – puff, puff – but when it does . . . Duuuude!

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  3. February 10, 2021 at 9:32 pm

    Hee hee. Who left them in charge!? 🙂

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  4. February 10, 2021 at 11:08 pm

    Brilliant!

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  5. February 10, 2021 at 11:34 pm

    Perhaps someone should have inspected the track before letting the train run on them

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  6. February 11, 2021 at 2:21 am

    That reminds me of this time… Dude… What were you saying? Dude?

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  7. February 11, 2021 at 3:11 am

    I think the worse just happened.

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  8. Lyn
    February 11, 2021 at 5:29 am

    Dood : “Ooops”

    Dooooode: “What do you say we try again?”

    Dood: “Yes, yes, without the ooops.”

    LOL love it. Working for the railway has never been such fun 😀

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  9. February 11, 2021 at 11:46 am

    Sounds like Puff the magic dragon just landed on them!

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  10. February 11, 2021 at 12:39 pm

    Dear Ali,

    Thank you for that Cheech and Chong moment. Dooood!

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    • February 12, 2021 at 7:37 am

      Dear Rochelle,
      These are my Cheech and Chong alternatives – Chad and Brad. Not their first outing but possibly their first on Friday Fictioneers!
      Ali

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  11. February 11, 2021 at 1:02 pm

    That is some powerful weed, man…. Duuuuuude…

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  12. February 11, 2021 at 2:53 pm

    I hate to laugh, but this was funny. You captured the weed high tale well.

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  13. February 11, 2021 at 3:39 pm

    Dude. Really, Dude 🙂

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  14. February 11, 2021 at 3:59 pm

    Chad and Brad return to Friday Fictioneers! I missed you dudes!!!

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    • February 12, 2021 at 8:03 am

      They’re back at last! Fuzzywig’s fave duo!

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  15. February 11, 2021 at 5:25 pm

    This gives the old saying “why drink and drive when you can smoke and fly” a whole new dimension.

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  16. February 11, 2021 at 6:46 pm

    i wonder who hired these men but too late now. 🙂

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    • February 12, 2021 at 7:48 am

      Yeah. Possibly the hirer didn’t check references properly or something 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  17. February 11, 2021 at 9:55 pm

    What a wonderful take on the prompt. It made me laugh. Thank you.

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    • February 12, 2021 at 7:50 am

      I’m glad you liked it! Very cool photo 🙂

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  18. February 12, 2021 at 3:55 am

    A little like Dude Where’s my Car. Made me smile and wonder what the kaboom was. 🙂

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    • February 12, 2021 at 7:52 am

      I have that on DVD somewhere, I’ll have to watch it again! The kaboom, I fear, was a train falling off the end of the track they were supposed to have finished… 🙂

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      • February 13, 2021 at 1:41 am

        Oops! You should definitely watch it again. We all need to find silly or fun things right now to lighten the mood. =)

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  19. February 12, 2021 at 10:10 am

    Dude talk. Who can resist it?

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  20. February 12, 2021 at 7:05 pm

    This so reminded me of some people I used to know! I wish I knew where they crashed! Great job of capturing the dialogue.

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    • February 13, 2021 at 4:25 am

      I’ve never known anyone like this pair. I feel cheated!

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  21. February 13, 2021 at 2:11 am

    Sounds like a Monty Python or Saturday Night Live Sketch. So funny!

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  22. February 13, 2021 at 5:15 am

    Dude… that’s some powerful stuff. Are you selling? 😀

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    • February 14, 2021 at 5:39 am

      Shh, not here, round the back of he pub at closing… 🙂

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  23. February 13, 2021 at 9:55 am

    Will they ever finish anything? Perhaps one day when the run out of puff.

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  24. February 13, 2021 at 1:37 pm

    Boy was he right when he thought they hadn’t finished something. They’re so loose they probably survived without a scratch. Would Chad and Brad be pot-smoking relatives of Bill and Ted? 😀 — Suzanne

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  25. February 14, 2021 at 1:14 pm

    Made me smile, puff puff. Hope the Dudes aren’t in charge of a railway modernisation programme, like HS2 ! Where would be be ?

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    • February 14, 2021 at 5:12 pm

      The way it’s going, they may well be…

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  26. Mer O'Leary
    February 15, 2021 at 6:15 pm

    I have never been high enough to taste my soul…
    Nice one, dude!

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    • February 17, 2021 at 5:23 am

      I bet it tastes like ice cream with chocolate sauce and sprinkles 🙂

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  27. February 18, 2021 at 1:48 pm

    Personal sharing on the web can be habit-forming?

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