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FF – Unfinished
Here is my story for Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle. This week’s photo was contributed by Alicia Jamtaas.

“Dude.”
“Dooooode.”
“Hee hee!”
“This is some fine weed, man. Fiiiine.”
“Reeeeeal mellow.”
Puff puff
“I think… I think… I can see time!”
“What does it look like, man?”
“Like, like, swirly whirly colours. Real pretty.”
Puff puuuuuffffff
“I can taste my soul!”
“Far out.”
“I keep thinking we’ve forgotten something.”
“Like what?”
“Like, something we started but didn’t finish.”
“Don’t sweat it, man. Chill.”
Puff. Puff. Puuuufffff.
“Like, if we haven’t finished something, it’s probably okay, right?”
“Yeah, like, what’s the worst that could possibly happen?”
Puff puff puff
KA-BOOM! CRASH! WHOOMP!
“Dude.”
“Dude.”
Puff
Categories: About draliman
chad and brad, flash fiction, Friday Fictioneers
LOL! Those dudes just went up in a puff of smoke.
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And such a lot of smoke 🙂
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Will be some time before reality crashes in for these two – puff, puff – but when it does . . . Duuuude!
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Maybe it would be better if they just keep on puffing.
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Hee hee. Who left them in charge!? 🙂
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Someone else who likes a good puff, I’m thinking 🙂
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Brilliant!
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Thanks 🙂
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Perhaps someone should have inspected the track before letting the train run on them
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That would imply some sort of organisation going on…
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That reminds me of this time… Dude… What were you saying? Dude?
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Huh? What? Duuude.
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I think the worse just happened.
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Yep, I think you’re right.
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Dood : “Ooops”
Dooooode: “What do you say we try again?”
Dood: “Yes, yes, without the ooops.”
LOL love it. Working for the railway has never been such fun 😀
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Sounds like Puff the magic dragon just landed on them!
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Nah, he lived by the sea 🙂
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Dear Ali,
Thank you for that Cheech and Chong moment. Dooood!
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
These are my Cheech and Chong alternatives – Chad and Brad. Not their first outing but possibly their first on Friday Fictioneers!
Ali
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That is some powerful weed, man…. Duuuuuude…
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It is. They’re very happy with it 🙂
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Hah!
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I hate to laugh, but this was funny. You captured the weed high tale well.
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This pair are a bit too into it, I think 🙂
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Dude. Really, Dude 🙂
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Really really, dude 🙂
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Chad and Brad return to Friday Fictioneers! I missed you dudes!!!
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They’re back at last! Fuzzywig’s fave duo!
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This gives the old saying “why drink and drive when you can smoke and fly” a whole new dimension.
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Haha, I’ve not heard that!
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i wonder who hired these men but too late now. 🙂
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Yeah. Possibly the hirer didn’t check references properly or something 🙂
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What a wonderful take on the prompt. It made me laugh. Thank you.
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I’m glad you liked it! Very cool photo 🙂
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A little like Dude Where’s my Car. Made me smile and wonder what the kaboom was. 🙂
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I have that on DVD somewhere, I’ll have to watch it again! The kaboom, I fear, was a train falling off the end of the track they were supposed to have finished… 🙂
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Oops! You should definitely watch it again. We all need to find silly or fun things right now to lighten the mood. =)
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Dude talk. Who can resist it?
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It’s just so mellow… 🙂
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This so reminded me of some people I used to know! I wish I knew where they crashed! Great job of capturing the dialogue.
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I’ve never known anyone like this pair. I feel cheated!
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Sounds like a Monty Python or Saturday Night Live Sketch. So funny!
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I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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Dude… that’s some powerful stuff. Are you selling? 😀
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Shh, not here, round the back of he pub at closing… 🙂
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Will they ever finish anything? Perhaps one day when the run out of puff.
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Run out of puff? Nooooo!
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Boy was he right when he thought they hadn’t finished something. They’re so loose they probably survived without a scratch. Would Chad and Brad be pot-smoking relatives of Bill and Ted? 😀 — Suzanne
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Distant cousins 🙂
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Made me smile, puff puff. Hope the Dudes aren’t in charge of a railway modernisation programme, like HS2 ! Where would be be ?
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The way it’s going, they may well be…
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I have never been high enough to taste my soul…
Nice one, dude!
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I bet it tastes like ice cream with chocolate sauce and sprinkles 🙂
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Personal sharing on the web can be habit-forming?
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These two already have at least one bad habit…
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